I don't like how the book mentions the author to get out of explaining certain things it make the book less immersive than it can become.From the start it doesn't do a good job character building
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Even though it is a new book your work is great so far, i can totally see your efforts and your book has a lot of potential, it just needs a little editing and everything would be prefect, the characters are lovable especially the Mc. keep up the good work and good luck.
Your oddly specific with height. Trust me the story doesn't need it. Also focus more using words efficiently. I'd try some power verbs to punch up future chapters all in all its not bad
What is this??....... Rather read the novel, i think i like to read the comments they posting about the MC in each chapter.,,, (-_-).The comments are more interesting than the story and the blockhead MC... (>_<).
The translation is too bad and the book is not readable. I won't say this if the translation was bad still could understand the story, but the translation makes it so bad that the book changes the name of the same person multiple times.
Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert]This is a novel about MC wasting his time in his bunker for 2 years while others grow stronger and MC try to catch up with them.. Yes, this novel doesn't have an OP MC.. There is a tag "Strong MC acting weak," which is not true until Ch.100+ where he plays secret identity superhero.. But right now, I don't see MC as a strong character..Plus, you will see the author's review, which he asked people to read at least until Ch.10 because before that, it was just a story about MC wasting his 2 years' time in bunker.. I almost stopped before, too.. It is quite a boring and useless introduction..Because his strength fell behind other people for 2 years.. Even a normal foot soldier are stronger than MC when they 1st time meet each other.. He has a companion with him during his time in the bunker, and some of them are following MC, but as you expected, they are also weak.. MC is lucky to find a genie lamp in the bunker a second before he died.. Causing him to receive djinn which is acting exactly like a "system" we know of.. MC grow pace is quite slow too.. Well, some might think it is quite steady, but please remember that MC is still too weak to the point that he strength is lower than foot soldier due to the author wasting MC 2 years time doing nothing.. [Once again, Extreme Spoiler Alert]When MC 1st breakthrough to higher realm, he can chose which element he want to : Fire, Ice, Water, Plant, Earth, Metal, Lightning, Wind, Light (rare) and Darkness (rare).. And the elements he chose are quite disappointing.. Instead of choosing an explosive element or a wide range element, he chose the "passive or defensive" element.. Then, the author comparing MC with Magneto in X-Men, which at first, it kinda cool until you see that MC in action is only 0.000001% of Magneto strength.. MC also got 10 free stat points every time he broke through a minor realm and a major realm (later, 50 free stat point).. And he mostly spends his free point on his agility so he can run.. He kinda like a coward.. He always think to running away from the danger first instead of removing the "danger" itself or thinking the ways to beat the "danger," which I mean is either monster, alien, or human.. MC got one skill like a berserker where he strength will temporarily buff for a few minutes and enter a weak state after the buff ended.. In his weaken state, he is weaker than most weak people.. Of course, he learned a few more skills later. on..Due to MC weak strength, MC is struggling to fight against many people and mid rank monsters.. There are a few times he meets the monster out of his league, like when he meets gargoyle and hellhound, and fortunately, he meets other humans who are in a stronger realm.. He also can't fight multiple opponents (monster and human) in the same realm as him.. Later, there is the Arkhangelsk arc, which kinda boring until he finds out his hidden bunker.. After Ch.100, MC can finally be considered as strong.. He is strong but not in the top hierarchy.. If there are 3 stages, like low-rank, mid-rank, and high-rank strength, MC is just entering mid-rank at Ch.100.. So, if you are an OP fan, seeing MC struggling in every fight is sure to make you feel frustrated.. Now you can understand why the author is not putting the "Overpowered" tag.. There are "Comedy" tags, which I also don't see any of them.. Maybe that tag also means for future chapters, which is the same as the "Strong Acting Weak" tag.. But I don't say it is not a good novel.. People who love weak-to-strong types of novels will sure love this novel.. Only people who love OP MC will hate this type of novel.. That is why I give this novel 3 stars, which means it is not that bad, but I don't mean it good either.. It kinda average, in my opinion.. Well, I am an OP hardcore fan, so my opinion kinda biased.. Plus, it has been more than a year since this novel updated..
Came across and can honestly say I've taken a deep liking towards it, and recommend it to others who are looking for something new to indulge in!~~
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I really liked it Only the grammar had problems I'll jus keep up to dateMore updatesPleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeLo veeeeee eeeeee eeeeeeItttttttttttttt
It’ really good it could use some touch ups on some little thing like some time you will call him a girl or her a guy but that simple. I don’ t know what the guys above are taking. About its good
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