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over all good work it have good grammar but still small paced not bad as they are starting chapters. It will be great if the world is explained in detail by chapters
I usually don't review books but that's mostly because trial reads suck 90 percent of the time but this one's definitely worth a read.......
Legit the best story I have ever read, interesting plot and idea. However, the flaw to this story I believe is the inconvenience the hat has, which the MC requires his system to work physically with the hat on his head. Besides that, this story was well-written, translation quality is alright, and the plot is uniquely intriguing.
this is better than blood warlock pls continue writing it
It is an amazing novel. Really, author, you did a great job on doing this. I added it to my library to see upcoming chapters. Just like the other reviews, I think that this novel is different from the rest of the new novel.
How this story got so many great reviews I have no clue. Seem to be from alot of persons that are reading for the first time. This is utter rubbish so far. Read to 150 and it has been the worst novel I have ever read. The mc is suppose to be reincarnated from an ***** yet still acts like he actually is 10 which annoys the hell out of me. The author sometimes I feel has no clue what he is writing. Like in a couple chapters he makes this guy seem super strong that even mc actually hopes to be as strong as someday. The next chapter he dies to a weakling the mc already beat the crap out of. Tell me how on God's green earth does that make fuuucking sense.
Ok, so the thing u have to understand about this novel is that the first 20 chapters suck balls. Yes, yes i know, why a 4? because the rest a quite good, some even excellent. The real reason the start is so bad is due to the lack of any back story, character building or world building; u basically know nothing except for the fact that the MC reincarnated, and he was a super strong dude b4 that, THE END. After that however the action, the plot and all the characters get better, more complex. All and all, if u can survive the boredom of the first few dozen chapters, ull find is a great read.
This is my first novel from this author and I'm enjoying his style. The prologue is one of the best I've read so far. The characters are well written, the cultivation is easy to understand, and to me the best part of this novel are the villains that are not one-dimensional arrogant young masters that try to annoy the MC about futile things. They are ambitious and will do anything to achieve their goals. The only thing I didn't like was the beginning after the prologue, it was a really amazing start and then the pace slowed a little but it's ok.
This story is so random but amazing amusing that I can't help but think that this is how hanging out with your best gamer friend while high would be. Great comedy if you are into video game tropes in their full glory.
When I first read this, the thing that instantly popped into my mind was [I really am a superstar]. I enjoyed it in the beginning as I didn’t really have much expectations, however, the story just got blander and blander.Pace is a little too fast for me, to be more specific, I personally feel that the MC is going through too much knowledge way too fast. And each one of the skills he gets is annoyingly bad or unserious.While it may be cool to speak to dogs, cook addicting food, read a person’s fate, in the end, I don’t really see the direction this story wants to go. Other than the overly stated ‘become the great master Lin’. I mean, what does the MC get out of it?In the beginning, he is poor and in business city ShangHai. But by by the time I read a few chapters in, it’s like he just wants to be lazy and not work, pushing it off on reasons such as ‘I don’t care about fame nor fortune’.The side characters other are 2D. Other than their intro chapters where we barely get to know them, they just become the cheerleaders, knowledge providers, or little brother collection pieces...Now for those who don’t like IRAS, I’m not saying it’s the best novel in the world, but at least compared to Lin Fan, Zhang Ye actually has a goal! It may get side tracked or put aside for some faceslaping/romance, but the ultimate end goal is still to become a world famous celebrity (perhaps even the number one).One other point is that all the antagonists or ‘cannon fodder’ characters all had their IQs lowered to make the MC look smarter. An example: News report: Cloud street has 200% sales increase since MC moved in.Realtor A: let’s increase everyone’s rental fees the second time this year by 100%! That’s a smart move, the shop owners definitely won’t riot...MC + party: We resist! If you don’t take it back, we will leave this place!Realtor A + Company: let them move, it’s not like MC is the reason for the sales increase....#please look at the news report!!!In the end, I’m not saying people absolutely won’t enjoy this, but I was most certainly unsatisfied with it’s presentation.
Seems like the best out of this rounds trial reads. Characters are pretty humorous, plot seems engaging and logical.
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