Just shamelessly reviewing my own content...Anyway, this story is about two assassin androids who work for a large weapons company known as EDGE. I intend to update it with about ten chapters weekly. Enjoy!
It has mystery, it has thrill, it has attraction, it has hate-love romance, it has brutality and what not??!! Adding this beautifully crafted work to my library asap!! Well done Mahum!!??
to be honest, I dont really mind the grammar and im 12 chapters in. i also doubt he edited it because there are still typos. grammar isn't bad but the English is pretty elementary. now, the only thing i have a problem with is the character. see i don't actually have many problems with the mc as many authors write unlikable cringy edgy characters. I just hope that the mc will actual develop as the story progresses, and as im only 12 chapters in thats a big possibility. but while I'm here I do gotta point out how 2d these side characters are
I highly recommend you to NOT READ THIS THING. It’s about a girl traumatized, treated all her life as a kidnapped child, and brutally abused, tortured and RAPED by her husband. She’s like those women who cannot be freed from their husbands, like a child who has been kidnapped for a not short time. Without will nor HOPE. This is horrible and terrifying. Making her as a culprit showing him as a poor guy in love. Mega disgusting. And this is totally unrealistic. Romantizing CRIMES is wrong. Women out there are suffering because of guys like this one. Nothing funny about it. I really hope this story isn’t picked. HORRIBLE SHIT. I read the 40 free chapters in order to be just.
While the start seems to be similar to the gamer, it later goes its own way and becomes a truly great story with its own strengths. For those who cry about to much stats... Just don't read it. The stats are relevant and the character stats always at the end so that you can skip them. So yeah, thx author(s?) for sharing your story and I hope to read many more of your chapters.