it's good. Read it. Add it to your list. Get it picked. Vote for it. How many letters do I have to write in order to post this review? Oh, 140.
Too generic. World building? Just invent things as you go on.
MC is also a typical chinese MC. Hide my power. Blend in the crowd. No thoughts about not being a slave. He just goes on with flow. Its an afk wish fulfilment novel where MC is the only one with 2 braincells. Rest of them have only 1.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
is this novel dropped ? it has been a year since the author updated ....
Oh man, really needs an editor and a class on how and why not to creep on your underage chambermaid... Also I just learned that apparently in China a 14 year old girl is considered legal, there is a lot to unpack here.
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Writing Quality: No major mistakes.
Story development: This is quite a bit difficult to say. Although there are quite a good amount of chapters, but I still can't say for sure about it. But nonetheless, I hope MC can atleast be strong if not OP. I really am concerned about his Battle power.
Character Design: This is quite a good point to notice. There are different types of people with different personalities.
Updating Stability: Can't say for sure.
World Background: The World have a lot of possibilities and potential. If developed smartly, this Novel can become a good EXTRA one.
Hope Author continues to write this novel. I really am interested in this novel. There is a lot of potential in this novel. Also please don't lock the chapters anytime soon. I will be really disappointed.
Atleast try to make the chapters free till 50 or so chapters.
If someone needs to read 100 chapters to START enjoying your story thats a bad sign.
I mostly read more about romance but this book was nice, with the few chapters I've read, I found it worth reading.
A good job done by the author
This is my story and I like it, so Imma give it a 5 star. Of course its not worth a five star, yet. I need to work on all areas and I know my updates will be random for now. This is an 18+ novel so I will be coming up with steamy scenes in the future. Look forward to it.
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mystery is good but too much is just too much
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