From the first chapter you can already see that it will be another rubbish novel that will add nationalism and burgeoning racism to shield itself from criticism (from the Chinese) along with a patchwork quilt of cliches hoping to see if it attracts some sucker to earn some money
Aaaaaaarrrrgggghhhh!! Why the hell does webnovel even encourage this shiiit there r more novels in this genre than trash in the whole 'f'ing world. Only new readers might read it only if it is their virgin novel of this genre. Why can't webnovel just stop putting this shiit. Half of its uploads are being tasteless these days. I can just smell the ficking political drama going on behind this selections
To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run.
The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.
The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.
To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
the story is complete hot trash you make it go to fast your grammar is trash but you can get better i know you might not like how i'm saying this but how you made it was trash but if you start taking it slow let us see how he grew how they'r relation ships moved it would be way better than those anti hero storys
A time traveller who has perfect memory about music and films or whatever, and acts like he knows how much they're worth but then is stupidly surprised when he finds out. Tries his best to act like a scammer for some reason despite it all being legit... It's really, really dumb, idk what the author was thinking writing it in such a manner, maybe going for some poor excuse at comedy.
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Thhe writer is very strategic. I totally can relate. For the story itself, i would say it is very well written for it is something everyone can relate to.
This novel is very good ! I just read the first chapter and I already like it. especially I like the mc's personality and world background. I hope the author can update more.
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The story so far is amazing!! Hats off to the author!!!
Creative use of words. The story develops well throughout the chapters. And the picture created by the author is beautiful a rare skill. A good read