The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron.//////////////////////////////////////////
I am really enjoying this, I read every chapter right after it is released!
I have been a huge fan of zombie apocalypse genre since I was a child, and I am intrigued to know what happens next, waiting for the next chapter!
cons
1-the mc doesn't have any ambition when it comes to his personal power he is more of a teacher and scientist than a cultivator. As mentioned by author himself he is weaker than people his own level but his students become stronger way faster thanks to his teaching.
so if you are looking for a super ambitious and tryhard mc I recommend against reading this plus the first 10 chapters are a slow burn and frustrating to read but after that 10 chapters which is more like a prologue it will become better.
2- taking into consideration the quality of this book the world building is severely lacking we don't know about the cities that mc visit like population, culture, architecture.....no direction such as east, west.... no sense of distance, no means of transportation, geographical clearance, no language barrier btw different places almost everything is left to reader's imagination.
Finally, we get to the part I'm being waiting for! I've never seen a powering up system like this. It's so new and refreshing.[img=recommend]
I completely loved the story especially because my favorite person has a relationship with Mc. please come on author we take out chapters you are reading keep reading in a webnovel.
But why does it cost you so much to update a story for 3 years, 3 years without updating, please have mercy, I beg you.
So far so good, the story is decent and the characters are well thought out. I am looking forward to more chaps. The only thing I think could be done better is phrasing and a few spelling errors could be fixed. And maybe the best part but no system is in it...yet let's hope it stays that way!
I wish I would speak Chinese and read the Chinese version of this novel becouse the Translator can't even do basis math or forgets hoe much money Mc spend.
Example: One chaper Mc plans to buy something over 1000000 the second chapter Mc just spend 100000 for it.
And that's not even his cheat it's just not OK.
Afterall its not like this only happens in on 1 to 50 chapters no it happens in almost all chapters.
And I still don't understand if Mc is using Yuan or Dollar becouse at fist the currency was Yuan but then it became US Dollar.
Aother Example: Like Mc at first did receive 100 cash every day at level 1 but then at level 6 it still was 100 ( that's just a example I forgot the actual numbers)
Comedy/power fantasy that feels like a parody with abridged series vibes. Most of the pros are dialogue which leads to a quick read with few descriptions. A few times, the lack of dialogue tags + a character speaking twice in a row made me lose track of who was talking. But the characters have unique voices, so it never takes long to get back on track.
The story is a standard video game-inspired power-based world. In parallel, the world background and enemy design follow this theme.
Fun comedy power fantasy that can give you a laugh if that's your thing. :)
Do you even know the meaning of deserted hahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahha
I am seriously loving this book
This power is more than just OP
All hail the birth of the Divine Gaze Emperor
Am sssssseeeeriously reading this book till the end
If there's a typo in the summary it is already a bad sign. The fact that it's barely an excuse to write some stupid harem is worse. Give up writing, go outside, touch grass.
The story is really very interesting since the character will have to see them as a woman in addition to not knowing anything about cultivation, the way the events unfold makes you want to keep reading since it turns out to be entertaining. The personalities of the people of the cultivation world are very well represented; I like the interactions since they are fluid.
Well I suppose that the protagonist will have to accept who he is XD. I would advise other readers to read this novel.
PS: The way you narrate is fine. You are on the right track as a writer!