Your story is cool. It has great potential. I would suggest to enrich the world-building some more maybe? And maybe the character design as well. Keep on writing author.
Even though the idea of the world that the novel built upon is not completely new and unique, it is a good read. The plot is interesting, but sometimes I feel the MC unusual know it all. The characters might need more design. However, I only read just ten chapters. Will keep reading more. I will update the review when I read more.
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I’ve read into the book a little ways, and have one major concern. Does the author ever find a translator or anyone that actually speaks English to fix this? It’s a huge mess and difficult to read to the extreme. The book has potential from what I can tell, but I’m not wasting my time reading much more than the first few chapters if it’s going to be this much of a mess the whole time I’m trying to read it.
Well it have some promise but too many people act stupid or unreasonably here because author don't want to work hard on writing.Still the concept have some promise.
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Me parece una novela interesante en donde el protagonista tiene un gran desarrollo como persona en donde vemos su cambio de moral, ética, filosofía y percepción dentro del mundo. (sarcasmo)
A system novel but the system dosent stand out too much. Most system novel start with stats it feels fine in the begining but it starts to hurt sometime later as there are some ridiculous stats which does not make sense and annoying ~+ skills that blinded your eyes , im glad that the system was like this and i also like the mc character it fells more 'modern' not like some hurt m*****f**r which goes to somewhere and takes the beat out of everything if you know what i mean.. no thrill in that man
i just happen to bump into this book but deym it was good, i love the way that you made it into a romantic story with a good background and storyline. i hope for you the best and please continue making chapters because i love it!.
So good so far im digging the whole japanese vibe love it ?????????????????????????????????????????
I don't really leave reviews so let's start there. first the sentence structure seems really basic which is fine as it keeps it simple and easy to grasp at times. though I think some of it is to really reach wors count which is understandable. -takes time to really introduce the world which can be boring at times but provides a solid background to the characters and world immersion that many stories dont on here. -can tell thought went into each of the characters as none of them really seem wasted-progression is at a solid pacenow for story can tell that there is thought in it and not just mindless writing. also clearly at least listens and considers comment readers have left behind. its refreshing to find an author that cares about their work and readers interest. 60 chapters in and I greatly look forward to the develop and story this world has to offer.
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