Good idea but it's complete garbage the protagonist is Op but the author makes him dumb enough that he doesn't even try to use his powers and he prefers to stay with a weak human body instead of turning completely in energy as well as horrible where this novel ended up because even though he is immortal he prefers to socialize with a random village of humans and what came out of that was horrible without Telling the horrible character development (MC) he has divine powers that at some point can equate to omnipotence but instead of fighting he prefers to use an ability that literally doesn't does nothing and damages himself making him go into a coma and when humans start asking what happened he starts acting like a 5 year old child and then reveals a simple thing complete garbage with the title you expect him to be energy but you thought wrong he prefers to have a super weak and deadly body
If anyone can please send me a story with a good idea like this (of the protagonist being an energy type or something without a body) then send me
This Novel has an interesting plot with great drama and suspense. Love this novel and can't wait to see how the story unfolds and also how Indra regains his throne
Translation becomes really bad until it doesnt make sense
It's a novel that started with fiery scenes and then stabilized through interconnected but easily followed mysteries. I love the main characters. They have no trust issue whatsoever. At least they won't fight over a very stupid misunderstanding. Er actually, they never even fight against each other. They only make love haha. But seriously, the story is a gem, whether you skip the rated scenes or not.
If I would say, it's not mainstream.
It uses the system niche. But the system in here has a lovable and hateful personality, maybe the closest one I know is the system in When a Mage Revolts.
MC has reasonable growth pace, imo. Also, she's not someone who just do what her system asked her to do. She weigh things out whether it's moral or not.
ML is mysterious, but not overbearing, tsundere, unreasonable, prone to misunderstadings
Side characters are also not static characters. They also grow and change. And they each have defined characteristics.
Villains are of course hateful. But thankfully, their ends are not cliche haha.
Website : qidian china
Views : 4.29 million
Rating : 8.6(1334)
Chapters : 1920
Status : ongoing
Word count : 5.92 million
author rank : lv5
Easily the best out of this week's trial reads. Truly a breath of fresh air.
I love it, grammatically is very clear and the feelings of the characters are very well portrayed, congratulations to the author for working on such a good story, the only thing I would like is that there were more chapters to keep on reading.
Sorry if my English is not that good.
Hello everyone Ellendria here. This is my second novel that I'm working on. I'm planning to jump around between my two stories to keep my creative juices flowing. I feel this first chapter of mine for this novel went pretty great. As always for my returners I write on my phone so sorry if things appear off. Anyway thanks for stopping by!
I really enjoyed this novel, however, I wish it would update more frequently. It was been, I believe, over a month and it still has not come out with chapter 11. I hope that this story turns out better than it is now, but I can't wish for it to be better as it is already awesome. Good luck to you, Author-san!
Pretty great story with a great tale behind. Highly recommended for avid readers.If any errors found don’t blame the author but rather pity.A SINGLE MAN,A GREAT FATHER OF A FAMILY
Amazing that’s all
Author here,
Wrote this since I am a huge fan of battlemance novels or Battle Romance
This book has equal parts battle and romance. Since I can't say arem less it gets censored. I'll omit the h.
This arem will get huge, but the Mcs wives will forever remain at 3.
Everyone in this story will have a arem or will be part of a arem. And large scale battles for the arems will be the norm.
But a large portion will also focus on the main cast the mc and his three wives.
This book is chuuni so cringe with me as we self insert.
This book is written by Me, so characters with actual development is necessary.
This book already has a set end so it won't go on forever. I write with the end in mind so the plot should be tight and without plot holes.
I hope you guys enjoy the initial 30 chapter release. I plan to release 1 chapter a day afterwards. I have ps targets so hit them if you want more.
Should I get contracted I will add GT targets as well.
Stay awesome and enjoy the read.
Here is a picture of my writing buddies.