the book was good but unfortunately the author kept releasing duplicate chapters and completely missing out others so it became hard to keep myself reading it which is a shame.
I don't know what to say but keep up the good work everything is great writing is very good and easy to understand the characters are beautiful written this is the thing I wanna read
I'm not one to usually enjoy Sci-fi stories, but this one took me by the hands with the character design and the plot surrounding it. I'm excited to uncover more.
Loved this story bit I think it was abandoned unfortunately :(
First of all nice idea the Author had monster hunting in dreamland the problem is the mc is a transmigrated moron, foolish and stupid and into incest lacks romanse for the opposite sex except his sister which is disgusting the plot sucks takes 25 chapter to level up after eating huge amounts flipping orbs meaning it going to take alot more chapters myb 500 for him to reach basic level 9 he's weak but has the mc aura which means he can skip levels that's the boring part no realistic at all like the whole world is standing still waiting for him to skip levels his parents are retarded to the level of insane. My verdict don't read this crap the grammar is horrible too.
Worth a read. However, it seems this author is 100% incapable of moving the story forward unless there is some HUGE Badass group that he has to surpass ASAP or die. Why can't the author progress the story through finding out secrets to the world? Stuff left behind in ruins and old ancient tombs? I worry that this will be the the only way things progress for the rest of the story. There are 100s of stories that do this and almost 85%-90% of them are all trash
Yes shameless 5 star review. Well this is first time i am writing novel and i would like to try my best. And i would be happy if you give me your power stone. Well i would not drop this novel anytime soon and will try my best to develop characters and have no loophole. Since this is douluo dalu i will try to make my mc 'balanced' but it is hard in fact he is already op. But not broken. And i will try to make chapters without making mistakes. Please tell me if you have found any.
Well that is all
This is one of my Favorite Cultivation Book with Dual Cultivation theme. Story was a bit generic, getting Heaven Defying Treasure, Ancient Inheritance and so on and so forth. But regarding Story development it's one of my Favorite, his Treasure was not that kind of Treasure that automatically makes him Super OP. He needs effort and years of training for it, while his Progress was Certainly out of the World this novel potray that even he needs Hundred of years to raised his Cultivation in later stage. Not like other Novel where the MC Literally still a Teenager but his Cultivation was surpass those Genius that cultivate for hundred of years. Now the hateful part...... Yep this novel originally was from Liberspark translation. Last Translated was in 31 of August, I was wondering why they didn't update after almost two weeks? Now the Answer is here...... Again Qidian Stole popular novel from Another site...... I mean I know even those site didn't have legal right to Translated the novel. But rather than Killing other people's Business, why don't you just repaired your own Business Huh? Qidian? How many Novel in My Library have been Dropped by you? F*cking bullsh*t. This bullsh*ttery started when they changed Spirit Stone to Coins.... Doesn't you know that Snatching other people's way of Living was the same as killing their parents? I hope Karma bite hard on you Qidian B*tch.
Really well-written story about going on adventures in a strange world. The way the story is paced and detailed is really well handled and the character motivations are clear and compelling.Just need to see how future developments will be performed.Kinda wish we would have a few more charcters. Chapters 01 to 07 were mostly mc-focused, but it seems this is about to change soon.Looking forward to see where its going.
Good story with little grammar errors. The world building is detailed and the story flows at a nice pace. I binged it and read it in a day but looking at the table of content tab, you can see it has 42 chapters in less then 2 months.
I just kept comparing it to the legendary mechanic while reading this and so far from what I read (c40) it is considerably worse. Pros: Unique world setting wasteland steampunkishSomewhat interesting golden finger.ConsGets a cheerleading fatty that stands at the sidelines right at the beginning.The mcs class let's him learn the other classes skills but cost double expThe mcs golden finger is just ripped off from star craft.I feel like this is one of those fanfictions where the author just puts their character in the universe of a another novel.The game system is similar the world setting is similar (they both find a hidden world plot that was never done before) even the next update to the game is the same (introduction to space)This is just a meh fanfiction that isn't as good as the original