I think this novel has too much drama I would prefer it to be more stories about football with a little slice of life, but overall it's good novel
Hello! Author here again ^_^ Just a quick heads up, if you already saved them for offline reading, there are some bugs you might encounter. It was because I am still editing the chapters and the app would show the downloaded chapters first before the updated version.The only way to fix it is to go to your settings and look for the Webnovel App. After that, clear the cache and data so the chapters that were saved would be removed and the updated ones will be shown. Sorry for the troubles but I'm trying to polish my book even more because I am still finding little errors here and there and I'm trying to improve readaility. Thanks again and I hope you continue to support me! ^_^
Such a masterpiece....I will recommend this book to every novel aficionados cause this is really really good If you are into romance and cheesy genre then this might not be for you but this novel is love so you should give it a try cause I believe you’ll be hooked on this ❣️
Literally you can tell this novels going to bore you in the first chapter unless you want a generic empty Chinese webnovel. This is just going to be picking apart the first chapter. First, he’s supposed to have a thousand year old Uber powerful soul, yet 20 y/o literally most average person possible changes his whole paradigm makes him care about this random ass dead boi’s life and his mother is now super important he’s a thousand year old being why should he care literally the earth boys soul is called a drop in the ocean so WTF? You can already tell that the whole izroth thing is just to give extreme plot armor to MC for whatever future BS he pulls. And my other big problem is that the MC is borderline mentally invalid. What’s a video game? Based on how excited the dead boy was this is definitely not his first video game and it was literally just stated that he saw all of the dudes past memory’s and even stuff he couldn’t specifically remember before he died. The only good thing about the first chapter was the irony that when he waited to walk then he got hit
interesting Author. Keep it up
I have not put this book down and have not slept right for days. What a read. Loved every chapter and how you kept us in suspense the whole time. Can’t wait to read your next book but have to wait till it’s finished so I can binge it as well.
This book is something I always spare time to read. The captivating plotline and strong FL which I prefer always. Good luck Author!
Oh I can tell this is going to be good, but then again all your books have been
The scheming never ends huh and the main couple aren't even handling them well. To think Zivon's a \\"genius\\" and Xavia's supposed to be \\"smart\\" *facepalm* Sophia's existence is getting annoying. Idc anymore what she'll do once she finds out that Maison and Yulia are Zivon's kids with Xavia.
you are perfect as always
update next chapter pĺs...
Chapters are very short.