INITIAL THOUGHTS:
-Normally I don't write a review before 100 chapters however, this novel in my opinion has reached a threshold to be reviewed. So without further ado...
WRITING QUALITY:
-Out of 5 I gave this a 3. That means pretty good with room to improve. Readable enough to where I'll continue reading however, I notice the errors enough impacting my quality of reading. Hopefully, over time the author improves his English proficiency for a better quality novel.
STABILITY OF UPDATES:
-This is a bit earlier to say given the less than 100 chapters uploaded. That being said it's reached the initial threshold of 40+, unlike some authors who stop around there.
STORY DEVELOPMENT
-This novel just like most novels tells us there is a higher world/ realm for the MC to explore once he reached a certain threshold in cultivation. I got no problem with this since it expands how far the plot can go.
-The MC is at his first place of major growth showing many future plots on the horizon. I find this to be great as it satisfies the present plus links future plot points ahead.
-Overall well done.
CHARACTER DESIGN
-This section and world background are by far the most developed so far.
-The MC is starting this his original personality from his past life while getting influenced by his present experiences. He has shown based on the techniques he's found and powerhouses he's come across to have changed the way he views and interacts with his environment which is a plus for me. For his personality, you can see he isn't(in my opinion) Supremely Evil no Righteous when compared to other characters. He's more like an anti-hero. A man that is willing to be cruel to the cruel while treating the innocent with respect assuming they do the same. He's shown to be hostile towards a certain type of sect because of their methods to grow stronger. I'm curious about his stance towards larger picture plots, but that will be left for future chapters.
-Side characters have some personality and are integral to the MC development which is good. Some examples...
-His best friend shows sincere caring towards the MC he never had before in this life or the one before,
-His Gu Aunite is a parental figure who loves him unconditionally, which he never experienced before.
-The first woman he slept with showed him how it feels to be loved by a woman in a romantic sense that has never happened before. The more women he comes to love the more I see him maturing into a powerhouse that comes to embrace the world to protect them all.
-These are just a few nonetheless it illustrates how much development the MC has gone through up till now.
WORLD BACKGROUND:
-As I said before the introduction to higher worlds expands the development leaning towards a richer story. His current world has much to explore for the next couple hundred chapters. I'm curious about the various occupations, heroes, villains, legends, etc that make this story a fuller read.
Would I recommend this book? Yes! Do give it a go.
I already read the original translation up to chap. 144 and I try to read here for continuation because the update is slow and as I'm reading this my brain cells is slowly decreasing because of the translation I just can't understand what is happening, sometimes random numbers appear and the word United States just came out of nowhere
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I’m here to say this got removed from the voting pool on the Que of books and I don’t see updates I’m sad it got removed today :(
Is this story dropped forever???? someone please steal this and write your own I’ll drop $$$$
I cant even recommend this as a way to just kill time. It’s a trash novel, similiar to many that have been on trial lately. The premise could have been interesting, but gets killed so fast.
if u are die hard gamer then this book is made for you .
you got many characters with details .
author put lots of efforts in writing everything.
keep it author.
i did not even read the first chap yet but the idea of the system seems interesting but really 100 million words pitiful i look at you with disdain i can only say one thing:
pathetic!!!!!!!!!
hello author, when I read your novel at first I was boring and the story was a bit cliche with the case of the young Chinese master,.. but I read on and on actually this story is quite interesting, and if possible I hope the author can update the next chapters quickly, so that the readers you can be more flexible in reading your work... oh yes and if you can, you can show more scenes of 18+, so that readers can be even more energetic, greetings reading, yes, everyone does think this is trivial, but it has its own charm for me authors,....
and I also hope that this will have a netoric scene that the MC will seize the woman who saves time in the hospital, and I really hope that author... I have imagined that a woman named Emma is very beautiful and sexy, and I hope she can be a companion mc hahahaha...
This is a fantastic story. The writing is top notch and the setting is great. If you're looking for an awesome read then look no further
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Very fast paced action packed novel, I mean there literally isn't a single second spent reading this that is boring. It has a fairly unique approach on the summoning system, making it all that much better. Very well written with almost no flaws in grammar. Very good novel, definitely worth a read.