The second world is toooo Chinese cringe and CHINISE this Chinese that Chinese Author I hope you die. .. .. ...... . .. ....... .. .. ..... . .. . ..
As of chapter 30, I'm gonna say that this novel is incredibly frustrating.
As far as the plot goes, the synopsis claims that the MC has returned to the past multiple times in order to save humanity, but the author also (in the very first chapter) made the MC choose a mystery option that the entire plot is supposedly based around. And yet, the author has no plans on revealing what it could possibly be. The author then proceeds to shove this 'ooooh cool and mysterious' vibe down your throat.
As far as characters go, this is probably my least favorite aspect. One would normally expect that a 'second chance' novel would feature a MC who knows what it's like to be the very last surviving human. But it feels like nothing close to that. MC acts immature, naive, and downright idiotic at times. Because the author didn't reveal what the MC chose as his option, nobody can fully speculate why he acts this way, so the author deserves the flaming he is getting for that. It feels more like the main character is his actual 19 year old self, but received a few snippets of memory from the future. That's it.
To sum it all up, the author is trying WAY too hard to implement too many things into this novel, and instead of fitting together like a puzzle, the elements are just tumbling around together without any cohesiveness. I don't think I'm going to continue this novel
This novel is brilliant the mc doesn't just go out of his way to protect other peeps in an apocalypse were he can only protect himself but instead focuses only trying to find the people who are close to him. he doesn't just charge into to fights he analyzes his enemies and figures out the most efficient way to handle problems instead of running around and collection girls in other novels.....
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YO its the author of this novel! I can’t believe I am rating my own novel lol
But hey...I need to attract readers! So I have to be a little shameless hehe. So this is my first ever story I am writing and I simply decided to do it because I felt like it lol. Plus I am enjoying writing and talking to other authors who provide me with help (thank god).
This story may have silly grammar errors (one day maybe an editor will stroll by) and the updates may be slow but please be patient. I think I am getting better as my latest chapters are near 2k words. So I am hopeful that eventually I will have a more consistent update schedule but currently its like once a week.
Now I am going to rate this 5 star cause I am very shameless and I love my work lol.
Anyways please give this a chance or give me some feedback, to help improve it :)
Your writing skills are quite unique and the story development is smooth as well. Though I don't read martial arts genre books much, this novel has turned my views completely. Keep your hardwork! You are doing great!☺️
O would like to mention that the son of Chandragupta Maurya and father of Ashoka Samrat was not so well known... His predecessor and successor were a bit too outstanding....... Ty
『Dear Reader,』『Shameless Author with Shameless 5 Stars. I hope all who read this will enjoy it. If not, I hope they give me suggestions on how to improve. Thank you for reading, taking your time to read this review, and maybe leaving me a little something too.』『Sincerely,』
– ZGearCecil
Hi, I am the Author.
First of all, If you are reading this. you must be so bored that you end up being here.
Second, This is a novel to practice me from writing contents and to familiarize me with the idea of writing.
Third, I know the grammar is that bad. I'm working on it.
Fourth, If you are here anyway, why don't you add this to your library and follow my own journey in getting better (hopefully). Who knows maybe you'll enjoy the story in the future updates.
It's fun reading. I think my innerself is like Mo hahahaha ...., waiting for the real twist and turns in this story,,,,,, Love from me to mo
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