Such a heart touching plot! I really love the book. Good job, author! Keep up the good work!!
I think this book has potential!
Great read, a little long but worth it!
I love this! Please post more chapters!
No update?
This was an amazing read. I hope Jenny directs her money elsewhere. Well done, author
keep going! waiting for the next chapter. by the way, is there any socmed that I can reach you out?
This absolutely amazing! I just read the first few chapters and I'm enjoying it. Highly recommended
I read it up to chapter 64, and there's already a noticeable fluctuation in the overall quality of the story.
Here’s a bit of a spoiler:
The first arc, where the main character (MC) tries to enter the world of immortals through an academy selection, is quite decent. It features several meaningful actions, interactions, and some unpredictable plot twists.
The next arc, where the MC enters the Sect, is also unique. The Sect itself is rather unusual, and there are still some unexpected plot developments to keep you engaged.
However, just as you start to get excited about the next part of the story, the quality begins to decline. The plot becomes illogical, the interactions feel forced, and the events no longer flow smoothly from one to another. It seems like the author suddenly lost their knack for storytelling and is now continuing the novel in a rather amateurish manner.
, it's a big disappointment.
The main character's statements were contradictory. In this particular section, she previously expressed the opinion that "men in their twenties aren't mature enough," referring to someone her mother introduced. Then, suddenly, she changed her stance and claimed that "maturity isn't solely based on age." It's unclear what message she's trying to convey. Furthermore, I disagree with her belief that she's too mentally advanced for dating men younger than her, especially since they're all legally adults. The男主角's behavior throughout the first seventeen chapters has also been off-putting; he comes across as unappealing. Ultimately, I've decided to stop reading at this point. Although the translator did an excellent job, the story itself didn't resonate with me.
Read about 369 chapters, and here's what I think:
Not bad. It gets better over time.
My only complaint is the slow pace of the plot. It seems like I've read far fewer chapters than I actually have.
Then there's the world building, which I have to say is definitely the weakest point of the novel.
The only things we have are the royal castle, the black market, the royal dungeon, and a few trips outside the capital.
For an isekai, I expected more development in this area.
The further we go with secondary characters, the less scene they are given, and except for a few, the rest are practically discarded.
There are also some filler chapters, but they are few. Otherwise, the novel is okay. Give it a chance.
it certainly has its fair share of problems, but as I said, the novel improves over time.
That being said, I'll stop here, as this novel is not my cup of tea.
Again, the novel isn't great (at least it isn't as far as I've read), but it's not mediocre either.
C'est pas l'auteur, c'est le traducteur. Le livre original est en Chinois, et si tu veux une meilleure experience la traduction anglaise est bien superieure.