This book is ILLEGIBLE! the translation to English is terrible, you cannot make sense of whats being said in the book, as you read it gets worse, the author also confused the characters names a lot! when describing them! first the main character had blue eyes and then he described it with green eyes
The Grammer and English are not the best. chapter 38 is thrown into this book twice. It's in the wrong place the first time making the book confusing. This story is very unique and would be 5 stars if the book was edited properly and repeated stuff deleted.
Gosh! I really love this book
Intetesting book.
Definitely worth a try
I only read a couple of chapters but it's not to my liking. Almost every sentence is written like a new paragraph. Then there are missing punctuation marks. Sometimes it's hard to understand who is thinking or saying what. And connection between characters is discovered too late in my opninion.
i don't know why you never updated anymore....and start a new book already.sadly the story is good..but hanging .
I really want to read something else written by the same author of Michael & lilly story.. because it's clear the bonus story is not written by the same person.. it's not the same style of writing and quality
OMG!...Loving this so much. i cant get enough of Lily, Livia, and Rhye. I want more of them.
Beautiful book (S) , I highly recommend
It’s time for a new story. I’m going through withdrawals.
Damn! This was a hidden gem! Loved the roller coaster ride and the suspense. Kudos author! I hope to read on Ezra’s story though. He has this playful and strong side too. Enjoyed every chapter of this book! Will be checking on your other stories.