Supreme Swordsman of the Nine Heavens

Nothin much and im open to retry it if u can tell about the story more?

It's pretty bad. The writing style is just not good at all; there's too much telling rather than showing. Instead of having the character witness something cruel and question it through dialogue or other means, the author simply states, "Mu Yu thought about the cruelty of it all." I understand what the author is trying to convey, but it feels very forced and makes me cringe.

The characters and their interactions are also lackluster. The main character (MC) and his senior sister’s exchanges feel unnatural and more childish than I’d prefer. Then, he suddenly develops a crush on her, despite her not having any positive traits showcased in the writing—forced.

There’s another character named Ximen Buixue, who is supposed to be a funny playboy, but he’s not funny at all; he’s more of a creep. The banter between him and the MC is unbearably cringe-worthy and goes on for too long.

, if you’re sensitive to really bad writing like me, don’t even bother. The author doesn’t improve after 100 chapters.

The novel isn't bad; it's just somewhere between average and good. I appreciate that the main character (MC) isn't the only special one in the story. His "golden finger" ability is shared by four others.

However, the actions of the MC when he is still weak can be quite frustrating. The MC often does stupid things and seems to attract young masters like a magnet. Other characters are particularly irritating, especially his second brother. I'm glad that his first love didn't work out.

The story had good potential, but the author seems to have squandered it. Apart from that, the pacing follows the typical Xianxia pattern.

I gave it 5 stars because the overall rating seemed too low. , it's not boring, nor is it particularly entertaining. It's a fairly average novel.

I read it up to chapter 64, and there's already a noticeable fluctuation in the overall quality of the story.

Here’s a bit of a spoiler:

The first arc, where the main character (MC) tries to enter the world of immortals through an academy selection, is quite decent. It features several meaningful actions, interactions, and some unpredictable plot twists.

The next arc, where the MC enters the Sect, is also unique. The Sect itself is rather unusual, and there are still some unexpected plot developments to keep you engaged.

However, just as you start to get excited about the next part of the story, the quality begins to decline. The plot becomes illogical, the interactions feel forced, and the events no longer flow smoothly from one to another. It seems like the author suddenly lost their knack for storytelling and is now continuing the novel in a rather amateurish manner.

, it's a big disappointment.

I like your story! Especially those "What if's". Keep it up!

nice one ?