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A shamless 5 star rewiev from me ! :D I have absolutely no plan as of yet for what this story is going to turn into. I have only decided on a few key elements on how the world will work and how stuff will be separated.I also have to research some mod packs with a heavy progression systems now and see what would make sense. It's a huge hassle since I don't want my story to just be bullcrap thrown in a big pile. I could half-way everything and I think it would still be ok... but I hope I wont need to do that. I will try to write some more when break comes. I have made 2 chapters as of now and I will probably write only one more. Thank you for taking a look at my story :)
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The concept is cool but the story is slow and there’s a lot of long boring explanations which are sometime repeated to increase word count… otherwise it could become a fun story
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Character build-up and story development is pretty decent but the only problem is gauging the power of each stage in cultivation, difference is somewhat hard to understand :)
At the beginning of the story, I was really skeptical I'm to going to lie. There were grammar mistakes, the characters seemed underdeveloped and I barely understood anything that happened due to the lack of deeper expansion of the world setting. But after spending some time working with Ultra to fix the mistakes, the plot started to make a lot more sense to me and although it may not have shone in the text yet, Jack started to undergo character changes that made him a much more understandable character. Overall, the story has a slow start. The beginning doesn't have the same hook as other stories may give but after a few chapters, you start to get more into the story and the characters that annoyed you at the beginning start to grow on you, It's a great read really, just don't give up at the beginning because you're going to regret it later
Me encanta esta historia, los personajes y las situaciones son increíbles, aparte de las personalidades son excelentes, amo está historia. Una cosa que no me gustó fue la parte en donde les hicieron los exámenes para determinar el potencial de los participantes, me hubiera gustado que todo fuera más secreto.
Fun.
Plot points are too forced... and things seem to go the MC’s way in an almost suspicious way... My real life work is really harsh.. oh nice, players are gifting me money... oh, what a coincidence, the game itself happened to advertise me... bringing me more money. Guess I can now quit my job, how convenient. My reputation in the village is in ruins? Oh, what a coincidence there’s hungry kids over there. Oh, what a bigger coincidence we’re cooking “spider” legs right now. Yay, now our reputation is saved.