My first vampire story!!! I must confess, this story is WOW. Thanks author for sharing. I must do the same. I hope to see more chapters of this story.
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I think the story is pretty good even if the protagonist seems kinda dumb sometimes, its still worth your time, i havent finished it yet, but the story seems interesting so far.
Rated low simply for grammar and first person writing. I did this and I did that do not make for an interesting story to read. I struggled to read even the first page
.....................Hello, I'm not really good with reviews but I can say it was a good read and I'm waiting for the next chapter (if there will be).......................
This is amazing, I couldn't predict the twist of this story. I recommend it to my friends and they loved the settings of this story. Nobody can say no to this. I really loved it.
This story has a good foundation . Writer is very good at her focus for the FL and ML....The heart is there..... The focus is there.... The development of the story is yet to unfold....The biological dad should turn up on the 1st birthday... The suspense will be thrilling.
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The remarks listed below can be seen as suggestions rather than glaring mistakes. They are quite subjective in character and merely portray my idea of the aspects of your work that have the potential to become more. This, however,- does not mean that I find your writing to be lacking. Quite on the contrary: when placed against other stories here on web novel, and I certainly do not exclude my own leisure storytelling, I find that your writing is certainly above the medium. Nor do I claim to have the ability to successfully tend to the remarks made below in my own work,- I merely hope to tell you, to the best of my ability, how it is to read your story.Firstly, I am a reader that wishes to be submerged into the scene. You already greatly succeeded in this in most scenes, but unfortunately, it is - abruptly so - entirely lost in others scenes. I know you have the ability, and would greatly enjoy seeing this in every single scene you create. The dialogue is decent and engaging, and I seldom feel as if the dialogue is obligatory and forced. I do not, however, enjoy the sound effects. I have come to find that many disagree with this, but in my personal opinion; they sound juvenile. Incredibly so. To the point that it disturbs the flow of your story which you have so carefully build. Again, this is very personal, and it has been often brought to my attention that this is quite a controversial point. Concerning the characters, I believe them to be entertaining but they don’t pique my interest in any particular way. I sympathise with them, but ever so often I fail to completely grasp them, and I lose the psychological character I had build of them in my head.Overall, I sincerely believe you did a good job. I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to seeing more of you in the future.
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