I like the story and for once an actual kind hearted Chinese MC
However, the translation quality is terrible
Please get a competent editor
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start.
Looking forward to the rest.
I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.
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I genuinely enjoy storys where the mc has a daughter or child at all so I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see where you take this and I'll be there all the way because its promising so far
An average novel ruined by terrible translators............................................................................................
A surprisingly funny take on what can be considered a tired genre of webnovels, that being the "alternate world entertainment is lacking so I'll use my original world's ideas to get rich" trope.Sure it's like a lot of other works, but the author has made it just funny enough to keep me reading through the 60 chapter trial read.A highlight of the novel is the side characters, most of whom have no contact with the MC and are just living normal lives while becoming infatuated with the toys. Realistic depictions of kids and how they just so so so so NEED that new toy from the show, and then how to hide it from their parents, teachers, etc.The comedic aspects don't drag down the story, and only pop up every couple of chapters, often in unexpected ways. Like a joke that was innocuously set up a few chapters before a single line pays it off.I will say that the first ten chapters or so were written in a bit too much of an overview style that were a little off putting since it seemed distant and rushed, but after that it settled down and the pacing worked better.
I remember reading this a long while back, though not why I removed it. After 20 chapters, I do now. It’s a rather bland story, but fine to read in your downtime. I’m pretty sure the source got wiped, so this is your best shot, except for chapter 20 missing, to read it, unless you go to an aggregator’s site.
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THe Translation didNt come out quite right. And soMe times it Felt like the story just SKipped a beat or decided we Had to know something really important but bot That bad.