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Writing Quality: Good writing quality that is rare on this app. Could be better with more realistic/mature dialogue, but I guess that is a personal preference since some people are into characters who act like ten year olds so still five stars. Updating Stabibility: Good.Story Development: Interesting plot. Bad world building that throws you in without proper build up. Character Design: Horrible characters. Attempts to make a cold main character, does this extremely poorly. Main reason I dropped this. Would be better with a shounen tag and a more generic shounen personality as author’s style seems tailored to shounen. World Background: Interesting, needs better buildupOverall: Interesting plot, poor execution. Recommend making a shounen protagonist for future novels. Would recommend to people interested in shounen type novels, just not my personal taste.
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I like the story so far, it gives me SAO vibes. The only complaint I have for the story so far is in my opinion is a lack of buildup to the imprisionment in the game, But other then that, reading so far is very enjoyable and I would love to see more! ??????
I don't have much to say, I just that I find it difficult to understand how an 8year old is doing all that (even if he reincarnated) and people aren't questioning his presence in the show
Ohhh yes daddy likes that so give me. Oh and author you better make the Mc at least not a v#rgin and i hate v#rgen Mc's and at least make a humanoid beast harem cuz I think some of us here are waiting for beast s#x
You know, you could upload faster and moar. Other than this, there are no fatal mistakes :). I would rate it 4 stars, but bias is supreme so there are 5 stars.
Very Nice Story Progression as of chapter 24 so i am looking Forward to the Future development of the pornhouse. Also MC seems to have a Natural Talent for all of this. And the Girls all have a Personality and aren't Just Blow Up Characters.
You know what is coming with a story like this. Racism. Doesn't even make it 20 chapters before it starts so you know it is going to be wild ride. Not sure why China is by far the worst when it comes to this. It's not just patriotism it's racism and a everyone not from China is a terrible evil person in most of these types of novels and they are so common.
This book is utter s***. The Empress literally rapes the MC, yet its fine. No-one cares, and the Empress acts like HE is in the wrong. This book is utter s***. The Empress literally rapes the MC, yet its fine. No-one cares, and the Empress acts like HE is in the wrong.
La historia es muy buena, y puede tener un gran desarrollo. Pero toda esa escena por tomarse de las manos me parece un poco excesivo, no están haciendo mucho más.
So the author gave himself a 1 star?
That's already enough for me to give him a 5 star rating!
Word count requirements are annoying ,like really.