If excessively arrogant characters who pick fights with little kids is not annoying then this won't bother you... but this is enough to lower my rating (minus 2 stars) Otherwise there is nothing amazing or terrible just another generic xianxia... I had hoped the mc would elevate the novel... I'm still waiting (hopefully things will change) Besides my pet peeve the novel is good... give it a try
Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)
1 Review!!!??? let me fix thatalo your idea is rare Almost unique it intrigues me and seems interesting therefore i will read this with fairness
Very interesting and unique new story from Hide. Knowing his quality of work this one will be really good too. Looking forward to a new fave work by Hideousgrain.
interesting and I like main character quite a bit!
TBH after reading the story, I always thought in my head, that Mc is like a dog wiggle his tail at the crown prince, and I feel so boring? thinking about ? and then I read it fast but nothing change. Mc has so many potential but he didn't try to upgrade it to another lv.The story is lack of attractiveness That's why it's boringI don't know what you think guys about the story, but this is my honest review
I really like it, because i love baseball but because i love story.
Amazing. Sometimes i wish it come out on anime bc it is more interesting and awesome. It cool that he have good power match him and his personal. I think it is good book
First of the Douluo Dalu series.
Cultivation, martial souls, reincarnation, martial arts are the main aspects in the series.
Genres: Action, Love and Revenge.
I couldn't get past chapter 1. If I see the words "Dungeon Core" put together anytime soon, I'm going to kick somebody. The way this is written is so weird, confusing, and childish. If I didn't see A-Z, I would not be sure it was English.
I mean, Damn. And not to say the grammar was terrible, it's just... whoever edited or translated this probably doesn't use English that often, speaks often, or is still in High School.
That's all I can say.
Hey y’all the author of this story is actually a friend of mine, I know many of his loyal fans are still hoping that this novel gets an update, but sadly it won’t. Last year he found himself in an extremely dark place, and took his own life. I’m writing this to tell everyone here that they should look around themselves to see those that are in pain, loved ones or not, and comfort them so we don’t lose other greats.
the author wrote Destiny forge... hmm i hope the he will write a complete novel this time.. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,,.,,.,,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.