Wow I didn’t expect to see it back on here :0 I really hope it gets chosen this time. I like the novel and tried to read the raws but it just hurts me to read them.
I had high expectations, but honestly i am dissapointed by his hero complex and frustrated by the cliche villians.
I wish you the best, amma peace out.
I think the overall premise is good, but there are just so many POV's and it switches so frequently that it is confusing me. I think POV switching should be highly limited for ease of reading.
Yes i one of those authors who rates his own stories suE me bEcause i think this has tons if potential sorry for the long hiatus had covid but im good now So comment in the chaps help me make it better for you guys and leave some stones will ya!!!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Any romance now or in the future?
From OP to an average MC. How unique
Awesome. Great storyline I can say. I can't help but get excited to find out what is gonna happen in the next coming chapters. Keeping going author, ?? All the best.
The story is great, the character's development and the story plot is superb. I love this type of story and this book really grabbed my attention. Keep going, author.
Im liking it so far! there was a chapter that repeated 3x though which was pretty annoying but the story itself is great!Definitely would recommend
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Wooooooo!!! Cultivation story anytime! As for harem…… nil sighted at the moment!!?? Interesting characters and hope to read more!