Grayback
This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.
This is the first game like novel I've finish reading and it's all worth it. I enjoy reading every chapters because the writing style is very good and detailed. The mc is very good and his personality is well written. Highly recommended for everyone.
Good stuff but no recent updates is sadge
An interesting story ,,but there is need to develop the character of the protagonist ,as Alex being a second gen hier of Ambrose family -the family which influences the whole world so I think u need to develop the Alex character more ,,
AND A HUGE REQUEST PLZZ MAKE ALEX MEET DEBBIE SOON
Wow, so many people freaking out in the comments of negative reviews. Water Army much? At least these kind of reactions and reviews seem to be often incurring with QI novels, though the twelve year olds and the like cannot be ruled out I guess. Or is this about the proofreader and translator asking for 5 star reviews as incentive for more releases?
Read to the latest chapter (61) out of boredom and daresay that I can predict quite a bit of the story already. Sorry I do not evaluate this story highly either and certainly do not expect any surprises regarding the further development. I rate the translation quality highly but the story gives me quite generic impression.
Silkpants reincarnation, revenge plots, previously useless "trash" char now impresses everyone as the mc and keeps face slapping everyone that looks down on him, of course after long build ups and fillers that point out how awesome the mc is that also serve to increase the word count. MC of course has all kind of high level cultivation techniques and the super awesome alchemy emperor knowledge at hand due to his previous life.
Sorry, nothing particularly interesting or different imho. Curiously looking forward whether this review will be deleted or what the fanboy/water armies will call me.
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Recently I've been suffering from some terrible insomnia and I sometimes take hours to fall asleep. This novel through some unholy means put me to sleep in a mere 3 chapters. 0/5
I don't even know where I start with the numerous problems this novel has.
Firstly if the MC happened to step on a cockroach the next 5 chapters would be about the cockroach's illustrious family line the has connections to royalty and super duper grand mages and how they and the whole continent are now hunting the MC.
This situation repeats it self 2 or 3 times in the first 40 chapters.
Next would be the MC's iq as it starts at decent level and every chapter it drops a little.
Now 40 chapters later the MC can barely form coherent thoughts, he just stumbles and plot armors his way through the story.
With one girl even more lacking in iq than the MC blindly following for no reason at all and another girl that is plot armor in character form.
I could literary write an essay on this novels shortcomings and not even list all that appear in the first 40 chapters.
I am sincerely in awe by the people managing to reach this far into the story without asking a salary to read this "novel".
If I could I would rate the story lower but I wouldn't be honest as the stability of updates and translation quality manage to add another star to this horrid story.
Oh my gosh really a great story!!! Ahhh keep up with it. I don’t know why others are having issues with bl stories I enjoy them myself. I mean live is live such people are really weird lol but all are free to feel like they want. Still ur the author don’t let others control u. Nevertheless I am loving the novel and can’t wait for more. I so highly recommend this story to everyone!!!
Come on let’s take dis book to the top!
Get it some power stones and ratings.
Or am i the one lovin the Johnson family???
Interesting story with a lot of potential!
The shifting POV is a nice touch.
There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo.
Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful.
The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from.
Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.
No Game No Life is my most favorite anime... It's a pity though that we need to read the rest of the story on LN because there's no season 2 on anime
