are the girls not pedos‼️
What was that rush of a beginning? I’m so confused. Why is Lu Xuan out in the woods? Is he an orphan? Why is the novel starting with him cultivating, without any of his reactions? Start is an information dump, with zero presentation. After it immediately goes into him beating up kidnappers who are kidnapping the children of the former wealthiest man in the city. Story starts bland, MC will probably be overpowered because he’s on Earth where everyone is just starting cultivation. We don’t get any feeling from MC, he doesn’t seem human. He’s getting a second chance but we don’t get any emotion. Feels like it’ll be a cliche story, as mentioned below. First impression, this is hella rushed and confusing as hell, with a bland MC.Personally I’m not gonna read this, or will read it when I’ve got nothing else to read. Comment if you think differently.
20 chapters, not much going on ,so one word -Interesting
Good evening and once again, but no less important: Thank you for the chapter. As for this story, I admit that at first I didn't have high expectations. I thought it would be difficult for a tree to captivate me as much as Yasenia, but I was positively surprised. Liu Shu also has charisma and the chapters are a lot of fun to read. The different ways of thinking between the races and the pink fairies themselves are great attractions in this story and also add a lot of tension to the plot. (Example: As much as the pink fairies want to defend Liu Shu and are willing to die in this effort. They're not as strong as the maids and Tatiana, so I'm much more apprehensive about the tree and the lovely pink fairies than I am about the Dragon. Who, in addition to her own strength and cunning, still has Tatiana, Valeria, Mirror, Maids, Harem... and a whole range of allies). I kind of underestimate that Yasenia will cope with whatever the Heavens throw at her, but Liu Shu won't. Yasenia's ability is a trait developed from her efforts and I really like this hard-working MC that our Dragon is. But I have to admit that Liu Shu's naivety and fragility also have their charms. In short, you're writing two very good stories with immensely different but equally captivating protagonists.
-Suzushiro
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Yes, it's erotic. No it's not Fap'n'go. This is a real Adult Novel. Not a porno in words. The author does a great job of having a real story and world history being built with very few info dumps all the while having a nice erotic tinge to the story for great laughs and silly situations. If you like to actually Read a story, and want or don't mind that S ex ,one of the basis's of being humans, actually exists with reasonable details, while not being smutty, then this is a great story for you.
The peanut gallery takes 40%, the face slaping takes 30% and the cultivation growth through cheat the last 30%, nothing else to see here...............
Overall, this story gives off a unique spin to a genre that's been down thousands of times. Making it seem completely new and fresh. Not repetitive like some other works I've read. Thanks for writing such beautiful work. I enjoyed getting lost within this world you created.
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I didn’t read it and unfortunately I don’t think i will when literally the first two sentences in the synopsis are like this.
If I was an author this would look like a book that i would write. The story is good but the writing needs a little bit more attention, I think u were in a too much hurry to release it or got lost in thinking about the story that u didn't spent much time on the writing, I'm sure you can correct it and make it more comfortable for more people to read in the future if u can review the previous chapters and correct it. Overall this book is good and I hope that in the future u can keep up with the updates. Sincerely reader
Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?