I read all 7 chapters in one sitting and I enjoyed it. However from the looks of it the story hasn't been updated in a while which is unfortunate as it has a lot of potential. Mostly the animation aspect.
Reading Status: C31
Writing Quality 5/5
Stability of Updates 5/5
Story Development 3/5
Character Design 3/5
World Background 4/5
The total score: 4.0
I recommend reading if you have time
I can tell that the author is improving, the story is progressing nicely, the character feels somewhat alive,its wholesome, the action is Still a bit lacking but overall its good[img=recommend]
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I love everything I've read so far even the deleted chapters it's a great beginning to a story my only hope is that the author decides to write a lot more at some point
I really liked how I wrote each word. I have dedicated a lot to this work.On the other hand, it is an original novel without copies or inspiration in others. This was all part of a dream I had.
it became really bad in the latest chapters like a chapter from 700+ where the chapter can be easily summarizes to few sentences but the chapter is filled with hundreds of words just to describe it and the story becomes so slow where an arx that can be completed in 5 chapters became 10 because of really long filler words
Seriously, please vote and power stone this novel. It's really great.This is Overlord, but with some differences;True New game + (Has all his godly equipment and stats, but essentially has to play the plot again.)Godly existences that can truly threaten the MC. He has to be stronger than what he was before.Mc starts alone with floor guardians not present. His most powerful NPCS are likely all dead, but their heirs exist.----------------------------------------Lots of things that Overlord did right are present in this novel. Amazing world building, in depth lore, explaining mechanics, big brains, conspiracies, huge overarching plot, overpowered etc. The translation quality is top quality too.JUST READ IT!
ohhhhhh~ I like this. Faster updates! Faster!!! I cant wait for new update.!!! I haven't read a story like this in sooo long!! lol I'm already hooked.
A great piece of work, Must give try, all i want is the author to update more chapters, its addicting when you start reading. The characters and the story is well written too ??