I thought the novel would have some serious aspect in it despite the constant misunderstandings. But, man no everyone is stupid even the mc is f***ing stupid.
I would recommend this book it is great. Once you start reading you cant stop. Its a real page turner. The auther has an amazing talent.
I’ve long known that this day would come, just... didn’t expect it to come so fast (that’s what she said, lol). Right around when “sign-in” novels were increasing, with how Webnovel does things usually, wouldn’t be surprised if I see Sign-in Buddha’s Palm here in trial read someday... and here it is, with a new name slapped on top of it.
I swear to god, does Webnovel think of us as idiots? Do they think that just because they gave it another name that we wouldn’t recognize it’s SiBP? The NERVE!!!
I'm not a huge fan of isekai I only watch it to pass time. but your story is good i would recommend it 11/10 nice story and character development.
Yeet!!! I noticed some errors in grammars but nah!!! Even Grammarly and a little proofreading will remedy those!!! Story Development and pacing is just right, I think? The pacing got rushed after the 5th Chapter though. Fast-paced is different from rushed. Don't be excited to write your thoughts, that's where almost all writers rushes their works. My past work is just like that too
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I have to say, I like the writing style and the story development and character building, is isn't too slow or too fast it moves with the perfect pace and keeps us wondering what will happen next!!
Keep it up author! Looking forward to much more updates!
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I think this is one of the webnovels that is going to be really, really popular very soon. Clean, clear writing for the most part and the pacing is spot-on in the goldilocks zone of giving enough detail to be tantalizing without being overwhelming. Also, has a lot of forward momentum with the pacing and leaving hooks at the end of chapters. I'm a sucker for world-building and not-OP MC, so this is exactly the type of read that will hook me.
One writing habit to keep an eye on is duplication of transition words within sentences (such as using 'But' to lead-off the sentence, and then also as the midpoint), and keeping up variability with modifiers.
I'm glad I found this one now, because there is enough content to binge-read in the coming weeks. :)
love it........................ ..................... ..........................sooooo much wish there was more I read it in a span of 3 days xD
I don't understand why there are so pitiful no of proper reviews. The plot is engaging, the whole background and premise are well planned to give a sense of intrigue, all characters have a "brain" to think(including side characters and enemies), mc never thinks with his lower half, and even side characters have character development(ofc mc has some moments as well but the story is currently in development stage) and every single character has a personality( no filler characters just to be there to provoke mc). I urge everyone to give it a try and see for themselves. Thank you author, for the amazing novel and keep it up.