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The review gonna be a long one. It worth it.This novel is quite short considering it is a chinese novel. However after I finished reading this, I can tell that author really did a good thing. This novel is short but well-thought and executed.This novel revolve around Ye Ping the main character who tranmigrated and lived his life as a scholar for 3 years. He was considered a young genius that could become a confucian master. However after knowing he was tranmigrated into a cultivation world, he decided to change his "career" and find a sect to join.Long story short, he was accept into a sect that was full of ordinary cultivators. However, his senior brothers and sisters all acted as supreme immortals and teached him all make-up nonsense about dao. In the end, it turned out the make-up nonsense was the core of dao and mc, a genius, comprehended it all under a year.SPOILERTo clarify, some of his senior brothers were indeed ordinary in the beginning due to various reasons. However they actually have a huge background without knowing it themselves until at later chapters. As for his sect leader, he actually was a top powerhouse but then sealed his memory and become ordinary cultivator until at later chapters. A lot of readers feel the development is full of plot armor but I think author really had thought it well. If this was a long novel, i would agree. But in just 200ish chapters, everything that was happening make sense and doesn't feel abrupt at all.*important*Remember one thing tho, mc's eldest senior brother is son of destiny and naturally had massive luck in him. So dont think it just as plot armor whenever he accounter something good at later chapters.
First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way
Give this a chance. This seems fun and refreshing just by reading the summary. Hopefully this will be picked by webnovel. Too many novels with potential don't get picked this days. Kudos to those writers who don't get tired in writing for us readers. ?
⚠️Spoilers⚠️:Two chapters in and there is already a massive plot hole. See, Merlin was one of the strongest figures in their world's history and his class was also the same as the MC's; an SSS-Class - Reader. But somehow, the very same teacher who used to brag about Merlin's achievements didn't recognize the MC's class even when Merlin's autobiography was available at the library. There is also the problem of the slightly less powerful, ice cold, and focused heroine. The side characters are two dimensional and didn't have proper development and they were used as items to drive the plot. In terms of the grammar, I didn't notice any big error but it was still a bit of a struggle to not focus on the minor errors.
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So cliche. It’s just one cliche after another. Not only that, all the characters in it are so fake. None feel real or are realistic. The MC is kinda annoying, too. The novel is fast-paced, and the MC goes from weak to strong waayyy too fast. I thought it might be a fun, casual read at first, but I can’t sit through it. There are some points where it is so cringeworthy I have to look away for a second.
Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.
Is this still on going or is it dropped?
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So many 'daoist' users in the power stone contributor rankings. This novel's been on the top ten list for so many days. Aren't the admins not going to do anything about this.The author's account deserves a ban. I can't even click his/her name so maybe already banned ?