i like the suspense and the team dynamic, a very good novel
Author have a Rough gem right here, If they can keep it up, It's can become a great peaceful read.
I actually quite enjoy reading this book I don’t know how it isn’t contract yet just continue to upload and I’ll continue to support you
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I see a lot of hate for the author but you got to respect him for listening to our opinions and rewriting the story from the start even though he could have just continued
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
at first I thought that maybe the chapters would be super short since it looks like the author released all of the chapters at once, but the chapter lengths are all what would be considered average compared to other novels.
Storylines is good, plot is good, english translation is good and basically the novel is good so far. 5 Star to support you! Hope you won't drop it and if you do want to drop it, at least drop it when novel at least 100+ chapters. I'm supporting you! Don't give up!
Good going and fast moving!! The flow is good with a sufficient details to make it more interesting and make us want to read more!! Nice thriller
Writing Quality: No major mistakes.Story development: This is quite a bit difficult to say. Although there are quite a good amount of chapters, but I still can't say for sure about it. But nonetheless, I hope MC can atleast be strong if not OP. I really am concerned about his Battle power.Character Design: This is quite a good point to notice. There are different types of people with different personalities. Updating Stability: Can't say for sure.World Background: The World have a lot of possibilities and potential. If developed smartly, this Novel can become a good EXTRA one.Hope Author continues to write this novel. I really am interested in this novel. There is a lot of potential in this novel. Also please don't lock the chapters anytime soon. I will be really disappointed.Atleast try to make the chapters free till 50 or so chapters.
Fantastic and interesting novel. The story and the writing quality is so fantastic as it never bores me, I really like how the pace of the story is going. Good work!
Terlalu banyak omong kosong, dan MC lebih seperti bocah idiot menjijikan, apalagi dengan beberapa wanita SH!T di sekelilingnya saat di kerajaan Orma, penulis mati saja kau idiot korea!!