When we got to the apartment i immediately ran to my room. I cried myself to sleep that night.
Echidna : "A flaw in my words, my apologies. I'm able to bend the rules whenever it suits me. However, the Third Trial is the only trial necessary to be taken when the moon is rising."
Geat stuff. MTL? Anyone???Mamsmsnsmsm
The Story Is Touching And Gives A Promise Of Comfort For People Going Through Similar Things Who Come Across It.
Here for FP. Thus, take these filler words
"Is your master accepting any more students?"
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great story.had fun while reading. very enjoyable.must read.in my all time favorite story. cool MC. and different type of story then classic storys.
it's good ? you should read it though mc should show more emotions if possible its just my opinion it's ok either way ... hopefully (author) you will not make this story a harem novel with a brainless mc arrogant mc later in the story who only thinks with the lower half of his body ok thanks ..please don't lock the future chapters i can't afford to unlock them just for this once ? please ?❤️
Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory
like it when it was at the beginning but got off track after that it is too clinch to read now
Author here and as the author, I will shamelessly give myself a five-star.Hehe, that aside, I had promised myself I will only give this book a review once it reaches the 50th chapter which we have happily reached.Now, unto the storyThis is my first time writing a Chinese novel and it's challenging because I research all the time.I will review my book in different sections.Writing Quality: I don't have a good writing quality as I edit my book a lot. I speak English but it's not my first language and it's hard because I tend to mix up some words together, so forgive me if you find some mistakes.Story Development : I can't say a lot for this because I tend to go with the flow which is something I enjoy. I like the thrill of wanting to know what the next chapter has in store for me.Character Design: I will give myself a five-star here because I believe I have crafted beautiful characters and let me say something, my favourite character is Xin Yi, the FL's brother. Don't ask me whyUpdating Stability: Two chapters daily, I give myself a pat on the back because I have been doing a good job so far (But if I can get magic castles, three chapters in addition to my normal two chapters daily)World Background: I have really done a good job here or so I think.Basically, just keep reading and see what Xin Yan and Li Qiang has in store for us. I'm also eager to know.Thank you for supporting me thus far.