"That red-headed girl, when did she come back?" Callista mumble and that figure was nowhere in her vision if sight now.
Now that she's gone, Callista can't help but think if she already knew she was gone.
i don't actually regret this it was hard to stop myself from laughing reading this.
First an explanation for my score as an "Chinese" reader.TQ: 4 stars for the language (and culture) problem,"translation" can help none native speaker understand most part which is "WHAT'S UP
While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.
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The pace of the novel is very slow in comparison with other similar novels in the same genre. Same goes for the mc to become stronger if not for the fact that he can fight more than his power allows , Also from the way author is going with novel it looks like it will take months to reach certain arc where mc meets his origin family and with some female character introduced which are possibly future harem members are way above his current power and knowledge which tells it will be a long novel not that i mind because it will be good but if the pace was a bit more than it could have been more enjoyable . like literally it takes so much chapter for mc to just turn from 11 to 12. as far as i have read i.e till chapter 400 it is overall good with some problems which can be rectified in future.
Nix is a iconic king and he deserves to get revenge against the people who imprison him and solaris is just a baby waiting for the mystery to unravel behind his imprisonment
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This novel has very unique ideas for a genre that’s usually generic. The author does a great job in the world building with how detailed the discriptions are. If you’re looking for a cultivation novel that paves its own path, this is your best option.
Hey everyone this is the author, of course. ?Anyway, I hope the story is to some people’s liking? Please let me know your thoughts as it can give me feed back on what to change or add from the story. Also, suggestions are great if I do continue to write more. Like a certain character’s side story. Idk really but I loved love for you to keep reading and voting!Please and thank you to my readers for your support ✌
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