Very interesting work so far. I believe that if the author keeps the updates as promised, this work will be very successful. However, I hope the author doesn't put common things like harem or romance (despite being with the target) , seeing the abundance in other works, making it a bit cloying to read.
this novel have charector that I like it it has paission about being low key and far awai from the dengor of courese he takes action i like it about it
Any idea when you will start writing this book again I really Enjoyed it but left it just hanging there
At first it was good, but the more I read it the more nonsense it has become. Imagine Donghuang Ziyou didn't even knew Lin Xuan capability, how could that even possible for no to know that when MC is doing a lot of deed wherever he goes. Ziyou must already knew it, even if there is chance saying she is busy, she does have a lot of subordinate who can inform her everything that was happening to them. This is the reason, I dicided to drop reading this novel, it's also annoying a lot of thing that doesn't even make sense.
While the genre follows the normal copy and paste format that can be expected of the what’s next section, the book itself is actually quite good. It definitely has me hooked so far and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.
This is the first novel that I regret voting for. This is most stupid novel I have ever seen. I thought that the novel story would become good but every time the next chapter increased the level of stupidity to higher levels. If this novel ever gets premium it will be a total wastage of spirit stones
Why is this 4.8 still? This needs to be 5 asap! The narration of the story and characters are just hilarious, some of it because it's so ridiculous.
You won't be able to stop chuckling.
Yes this is ridiculously hilarious and hilariously ridiculous.
I can't believe they took it off the trial and chose some other crappy novel. This is such a great novel I hope someone picks this up even if it's not Webnovel.
Awesome story and i'm really looking forward to how it developes. Just a few things that i think would make it a better experience if fixed. 1- there are too many question marks in places they shouldnt be. A character would be making a statement and then there would be a question mark at the end, which isnt a big issue but can be irritating at times. 2- there are too many fully capatilised words or sentences. I know that its for emphasising a point but its a little much. Also all the "everyone shouted "WHHAATTT" "
gets old. It just doesnt make sense and makes me feel like im watching a cartoon. 2- generally the spelling isnt that bad but there are a few words that are mispelled regularly for example the word "read" is always spelled as "red". Its ok if its once or twice but this has been the same since the start of the novel untill the current chapter im up to (100s). For spelling and grammar there are many free programs like grammarly that can help you. Anyway sorry if it seemed like a rant but im just trying to help you out and make the novel a better experience. Great job on the story and best of luck
All though the story is not that long as of now I believe it has potential. I am enjoying reading it significantly more than I believed I would. There are occasional spelling errors but that is to be expected and can be easily ignored. Additionally there is a slow addition of chapters which I can understand since people have their lives they need to attend to. Overall very enjoyable read and I am looking forward to reading more.
Imma assume this thing is dead. Rest in peace I guess. I can't find his previous novel unless it's not on this platform. Btw stay safe from COVID-19 and wash hands with soap for 20 seconds.
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