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Still a little early but the story is really fun its also nice to see a non-human protag i hope that this story continues im really looking forward to it
seems interesting enough so far. so far it's reminding me a lot of the lucifer system novel. i haven't read far enough yet though, so i don't know if that changes and it becomes unique. as for the writing quality, the english is very bad but it's still understandable. all in all, not a bad novel, reminiscent of the lucifer system novel. has potential
Hell yeah! BEEN WAITING FOR THIS TO ARRIVE!
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actions
The characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that
Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”
My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
This book is amazing. The quality and the release of the chapters is consistent, the flow is good. Every chapter is entertaining even when it's about the background of the world, or about other characters.
Had potential. Starts off good but turns into bad MTL . ... ...
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This is one of the best novels I have come across. The eloquence is great. The plot is super interesting. I hope this one will receive the attention it deserves.
15 Chapters in and only one fight. The plot is slow but the characters are fleshed out well.
The only reason why I am reading this novel even though the battle scene are so less is because of the unique personalities and features of the character.
You got to add more battle scenes!!!!!! Or say goodbye to me, your loyal reader.
After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
I love the story...
it's interesting and this is my first time reading this kind of novel about omegaverse. the main characters has really undertanding and amazing family....
for the author....update more often pleasee