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I wrote it so I kind of like it. But
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Your weird author here. Please note - The main story of Xiaomao ends at chapter 446. Afterward, it's a side story of Mao Miaomiao, aka the main protagonist of Villain Cultivator Novel. The point of view will focus on Mao Miaomiao in Volume 4, and his personality can be quite... vulgar.
For now this Looks really well but then again this a new type of take on the two world traveler genre. so Far iT is entertaining. Hopefully this gets picked.
shameless self-review.......
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alguien puede hablar con algun traductor o editor de qidian que nos pueda hacer el favor de preguntar a la gerencia de qidian si planean seguir traduciendo esta gran novela? o preguntar a alguno de sus amigos traductores si quieren continuar con esta novela?
One of the best originals i have come across on webnovel. Please keep up the brilliant work!
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to preface this review, I read until the end of the free chapters and I figured I should give my piece.
The premise from the title does sound incredible, even for a system novel and when the MC finally gets more involved in the story around chapter 16-20, it starts to pick up. Between chapter 5-15 ish involves a lot of world building but it's not related to the MC which was a turn off for me.
The system also takes a long time to come into the picture (around chapter 22 ish). Generally speaking, the starting chapters can stand to be rearranged or be condensed since it's not enough of a hook imo.
As from the brief time I had with the free chapters, the MC is written somewhat close to an 8 year old would think, albeit more mature than expected which is a nice detail. I honestly couldn't tell you who are the side characters beyond showing me the names and what they are but not much more.
It definitely has promise and definitely isn't a bad read if you are looking for a pirate themed novel. It just could be executed better from an entertainment standpoint.
So this is the author from a different account.
If you have any questions regarding the plot I can answer them, and I also wanna see if people actually read it cause I don't trust that view counter....
The cover is from "My three beautiful wives"
This story is great... Imagine a guy like me who had difficulty understanding in english, dig out the info of the deep words just to continue reading.This story will help you understand that world is not too easy.You think the street is beautiful? Haha, this story shows that its only a view..Have a nice read.
Honest reviews are here.. When I saw "Unparalleled Comprehensive" in the novel title, I was hype like, "This novel going to had OP MC".. Because I like OP MC.. But it is not.. It not OP MC.. To comprehend the technique, MC needs to stare/watch it for a period of time.. The stronger the skills, the longer the duration MC needs to watch that person/item within the short range.. For example, MC needs to watch a person for two days to comprehend a rank 2 technique (2nd weakest) and that IF ONLY MC continue watching it for 2 days straight but how can MC continue to watch an unfamiliar person for the whole two days within short range without stop? At most, you can only spend a few hours on that person, and it will take like a week to get that skill.. Even worse, those skills are not strong skills. MC also didn't know anything about skills he comprehended until the system was complete and announced it.. So, it kind of gambles and is a waste of time to spend using it on a person. It is much better or less risky to use it on others things like books, walls and so on.. Grade 9 cultivator is lowest grade, and grade 1 cultivator is highest grade, while rank 1 skill is the weakest rank and rank 9 is highest rank.. It kinda weird that you flip it one level 9 are weakest while other level 9 are the strongest. As you also read many others' novels, you might get confused.. For example, MC suddenly gets rank 3 techniques, and you are like, "Wait, is it high rank or lower rank?" When the author mentioned that MC is martial art grade 9, I was like,"ok, MC almost break thru to others realm." The author DID NOT TOLD US at all about it until we figure out ourselves when MC tries to learn strong skill to break thru into martial art grade 8..MC speed of cultivation can be said as slow because he needs to find strong cultivation techniques, which is the author making it hard/nearly impossible for MC to find one..
