rathan
As a gamer, this book really speaks to me. Author actually captures what it's really like. Also, it's funny as f*ck. Author also has great language and grammar!
This is a great novel. Do anyone know where to read this novel online?
Spectacular. Without a doubt. Sdrawkcab is an excellent author who has only improved with this newest edition to the Evolution series. What's impressed me so far is that she wasn't afraid to change up the character dynamics and relationships to further develop their characters. And yet it feels completely reasonable. Keep up the good work! :)
-Ninefingers
The novel is not bad at all for what it is, if you came here for R18 stuff than you good.. writing quality its ok,,, world development well didn’t see any as of chapter 20 so I don’t really count it it’s still early,,,, update stability we get around 2 chapter per day so really good for me... all in all as author is new and English is not his first language this is a well deserved 4 stars.... If mc was op would have been a personal 5 stars (I like op mc) but well mc gotta struggle... mc probably will be strong later on but I don’t get that invested in R18 novel to read around 100 chapters before I get my badass mc.. well thanks and author keep on the hard work...
its name is different for the mtl version? if so can somebody tell me what is it? pleasethanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not a fan of writing reviews, but since I feel that this novel doesn't have the exposure and support it deserves and the author is sooo nice I decided to share my short humble opinion.First of all the world building is very well made, it has similarities with the ultimate evolution. Nevertheless it's original, has a lot of potential and it's slowly but steadily presented.There's a long introduction delving a lot into the mc's personality and worldview. For some people maybe that's a reason not to read it. For me it wasn't boring at all. I could even empathise with him occasionally. The explanations and building of his personality maybe were were a bit rough and forced in some cases, but it didn't make it unpleasant and the author said he would improve his first chapters so maybe this will not me the case in some weeks.I am not a native speaker, I found some small and not important mistakes, but not many and they didn't make my reading experience bad.All in all I would definitely recommend it! Let's just hope that the author keeps this high release rate and quality :)
Great book hope you Continue with this ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
Please somebody explain to me that what is happening on the site?I don't get it at all.novels that suddenly appeared on the site and it's not even clear that they're Chinese or original. they are all MTL translated and barely Edited even the names of the characters have big problems.and all of the novels of the site have become premium from chapter 5 even the originals? why original novels also become locked ones? is Webnovel going to become completely closed to purchases?
I like it.It has That nice DC vibe to it i hope you dont Drop it.You could probably fIx the grammar up and make some spaces with the paragraphs.Overall its good
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough.Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
it's a nice read if you're bored I remember reading the manuhua and going to the novel the mc is a bit too perfect for me tho but it was still nice the mc only love one person which is hard to believe I know and the romance isn't half bad mc has a good personality I would rate it 7/10 nearly everything is smooth sailing some bumps here and there but overall it's a nice novel that's worth a read if you just need something refreshing off of the normal horny xuanhuan mc.
