I like the story very much. It is very well written. The thing that hooked me was about amelia running away. I hope the author continues this work
Good story if you want quality to quantity, I have got wierd tastes in books so don't rely on me to give accuracy. But the characters feel like they exist no matter the creature or species and aren't just there to die. With how nice the quality of writing is, and how much thought is put into characters even when put on the back burner you can still remember characters. Only issues i noticed were the first 10 chapters have a bit of a up and down kind of pacing, which feels wierd. And we already established our character wasn't really living a lets' say 'fulfilling' life but he still had one which wasn't touched on much. Another is the writing for them is that of a writer experimenting and getting better so expect it. Other than That a great book don't know how long the Author will continue it for but at this pacing I would say from what I have seen like 35-45 more chapters underground at least. Don't think this is accurate and I am probably wrong but this is what I think and I am trying to help the author more than readers. Anyways 4.6 out of 5 stars would reread it when it ends like a year later.
I started reading it and I didn't expect it to be out of my expectation. the character, the antagonist was really my type, so cool. It was really out of my expectations. however, there is some point that I don't get it.
I have only read a few chapters but I can tell the story is off to a really good start, it has a lot of potential, the writing quality is good, the world background is nice even though I am not used to it as yet, overall amazing, keep up the good work.
Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
I've been a fan of the author for a while and I love how his story telling and writing style went up from good to great in less than a year.
im really looking forward to where this novel goes and enjoying the graphic fights along the way.
Hello, this is my first Fanfiction! I was very bored and have never done this so thank you so much for reading, and let me know what you like and dislike! Thank you for your time!
I have high expectations for this story after reading Synopsys, was a good idea and initially was not too bad, but after reading the story, I have one word for it ---- b *******
Nice concept but, the story is not up for it .....
the entire novel began to decline from the current MC chose to get power for reasons that stupid, absurd and bizarre
has fallenblue truly fallen in the battle or something cause this is not a joke .
author were are you
you can't stop this at mid like this at lest tell us beforehand or just say you can't continue
atleast we will stop looking for updates
Espero que no sea elegida.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
I've read it all!!(till chapter 69 hehe)
Love it!! Im still waiting for traps though... Pretty big brain idea from the author btw!! A new world with supernatural pp and pus lel
I love how the story goes since I am really, really, interested in knights in shining armors, kings, and queens and all that. Kudos to the author for creating such interesting story. Thumbs up!