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Did a great job on your book author, can't wait to see more of your other books in the future. Thr characters and were well described too. Keep up the good work and all the best!
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This is really really good! Research has been done. Story flow is fantastic. World building chef's kiss! Characters are like dressings to a salad. I really like this one. Keep it up! If you wanna know what the story is its about a German Engineer reincarnated in the past as a German but did a ra ra Rasputin who is big and strong and has one eye that is flaming sapphire. His enemies look at him with terror and fear but to his people he is such a lovely dear. He could preach the bible like a preacher. Full of ecstasy and fire, but he also was the kind of teacher that any women would desire. He will rule German land and never mind the Czar, but the Renaissance art, Tudor and Elizabethan fashion he brings will bring up the Great German Empire. In all affairs of state he was the man to please, But he was real great when his with Linde to squeeze. For the Queen Adeka he was no wheeler dealer. Though she'd heard the things he'd done. She believed he was a holy healer. Ra Rah Berenger Germans greatest love machine. He drank hard beers and said, "I feel fine".
I needed three approaches till i finally managed to enjoy the story, but then i really did. So let me explain why:(I've read 206 chapters at the point of this review)First of all, i'm quite sensible with sad stuff. I don't like it if girls suffer and i just want everyone end up happily together as "family". And when i started to read i hated the mc. I felt terrible for the girls and really disliked everything about the mc.I've talked about the novel with a "friend" of mine, after the author recommended it in my forum thread and he started and continued reading it as well. Later he approached me again and urged me to give the novel another try to at least read till chapter ~25, or maybe even ~80, because in those parts there would come really huge character developments. And and tried to give the novel another chance.He was right, after the start i really enjoyed the novel more and more. The characters are interesting, the romance is partly really super fluffy and after the start and the character development i really started to accept the mc as well.I still had some "problems" with the twisted relationships some girls have/had before. And i still can't totally forgive the mc what he's done to some girls. But the romance and harem overall is so fluffy and lovable, that i really enjoyed it a lot. The romance itself turned into something with deep feelings (and not only ***) with the characters really caring for each other. And the harem setting hasn't much unnecessary drama but shows how much they love each other. It's also nice to see, that not everything only depend on the mc but that the girls will also be part of the work/solution.So if you are like me, bad with sad stuff and mostly here for the fluffy harem: Try to read past chapter 30. The story and the characters will change and it will be a fluffy and caring relationship. And many of those dark things the mc did may not be as dark as it seems and/or get a good ending.
i dont think the title fits the novel, this novel should be called the i can break up a couple, its not considered cheating if the girl didn't get close or kiss the mc all the girl did is break up with his current boyfriend, and the mc is a beta mc who dont like girls
Seems to be a good novel. But not my taste. I found nothing original in the plot. Mc's incessant screaming and reactions and those capitalized words kinda put me off. I don't know why but something just feels off about this novel. I just felt like skimming through chapters without actual reading in details.
Another trash.Mc is a lazy a** bum which is very triggering to read.I don't recommend read this. It will make your head hurt while reading it.Plus the amount of inconsistencies is intolerable.
The novel is amazing. The author has done an amazing job bringing the world to life. The plot and character development in the story has been done to perfection. Great job author
I love the story so far, also the character plot and whole state of the world is very interesting for me. The only problem I have is that the character description and Lack of description to what got him addicted besides he had a wife kind of makes things unclear at times. I hope this is cleared up in future chapters! Thanks for the good story regardless.
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