the description was a mouthful to read out loud but it got me interested ??
I-This is the first review I've ever written but I had to write one for this book. It's not an exaggeration to say this is one of the worst books I have read in a long time. I liked the concept but the execution wasn't absolutely gutter trash. Overall, it's a very basic book with noticeable plot holes that experienced writers wouldn't leave, it also has very one-dimensional characters who just seem to follow a set of shallow rules to react to different situations. The plot progression and world-building don't flow well and are very unnatural, and what's even more unnatural, to me at least, is the character interactions, I have literally cringed at some of themI think it's a readable book if you're just starting out on reading web novels, but if you have any semblance of standards for these types of books or if you have read anything that's actually average in quality or above, then I would advise you to stay away from this. I hope this helps.
so its pretty good ngl I like how you implemented naruto's parents and jutsu in it but I have 2 questions.
1. will he get the sharingan and if so the mangekyo sharingan too.
2. will he get kakashis lightning blade and other jutsu.
good novel ,good pacing,even after 25 chapters mc didnt become summoner. mc awakened clairvoyance but it was only at level f( there is an higher level clairvoyance in same branch ) so mc not op yet.
no female lead yet. looking at authors previous books chance of harem is high.( unimportant female leads).after reading 25 chapters it felt like a good book. I suggest to read this book
ps: I write this review because alot people write low rated review just because it was asumoner book. and I think they didn't even read free chapters.
nice introduction to the story.. very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice
I think this book is going to be a very good book to read and i do like the concept and i think the character might be a bit of a passive person even though I haven't read it yet i still think this book will be very good
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I like this book, the best part about this book so far is the relationship b/tw Vi and Keen, and I also like the fact that the MC doesn't have the cliche class of warrior or something along those lines