Aliiireza
A wonderful novel. I hope it gets chosen!!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
great novel, this is already one of my favorite novel, hope you don´t drop it, and keep the hard word
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nope not into gender bender like what’s the point just make the mc a female to begin with why confuse things
exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Is all ready completed so I think being a fan is ok but you need to ask to repost someone else’s work.
You are trying to get a benefit of someone’s work that is wrong.
Don’t was your time just download the ePub.
Trash
..................................
I hadn't really known about 40k until now so I got to read a good book and search more about 40k
The story while well written is more about lemons than it is about 40k. Every chapter along with confusing perspective shifts feels like it's working up for 18+ content and not progressing with being a warp god. Also it is very similar to another story written by 'dez_burns', suspiciously similar.
A good story [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp]
Man all your books are great but the only problem is consistency at which you posts chapter as bro readers tend get bored waiting for the next chapter as this isn’t an animae in which teasers can be given to keep the audience intrested, overall the novel is great especially the twisted plot from the heavenly opposers and I’ll give it a 100/10 In terms of storyline,plot etc but in terms of consistency I’ll give you a 4 or max 4.5/10
too much trash talk to fill up word count 2 fast pass for only a few sentences worth of actual story progression
I will just put five star for the hardwork I have put in this novel.First of all I am not a chinese, so there will be some very minor mistakes. I must warn you guys that the MC will be a very ruthless villian. His personality will be between chaotic evil to chaotic neutral.
