There's a bit too much brackets that it felt hard to read in thge bginning, but now I'm 7 chapters in, it had kind of grown on me...the main lead character was a bit too hyper i think, he thinks to himself too much...but i guess it must be the character design by the writer.
A promising start into the world, but the story quickly devolves into uncessant bragging and acting like a stupid grade-schooler. If you want to read something worth your time, choose something else.
Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through.What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think.All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it!**: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T
One of the worst stories i read in a long time.filled with plot armour.the mc is partially dumb and retarded with feeling almost similar to ****** towards his sister who is a cocky,ungrateful,b*tch. If you are going to read this i warn you - the author has a very weird and twisted sense of love .
It a great book i am finish tho when i was on the last chapter i throught there was more so i click my volume down to go but when i try to click down for at least 1min i throught it broke then again i came back here and saw it was 12 chapter only.i was so hype good book tho.Keep the great Work Author
This is my favorite novel here on webnovel, hands down. Auntie Flow is my role model, I eagerly read every update, and my only regret is I don't have the willpower to let chapters build up for a proper binge session. If I could pay the author for more releases per week I would.
The story is pretty fun so far. It's a fantasy male to female GB which is something I'm fond of. But I understand it's considered one of the more eccentric tastes and plenty of of readers dislike. The best thing about the story is the dialogue, without the comedic dialogue between characters it might be considered a bit dark. Only slightly, nothing I would consider truly dark so far. Just somewhat discomforting if you think about it. So don't think too much and enjoy.As for Worldbuilding it's only just starting so I can't really say anything about it. I do hope our cute tsundere foxkin missy can catch a break or calm down a bit *heh* eventually. Overall I'd this is the kinda story where you laugh at the MC's suffering and antics while still hoping the best for them. Seems contrary but that's how it is for me.
HmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmI....... Know from just looking at a novel cover or title that this is a good story my guts feel it(3 month old in reading novel)a good story created from mistakes and failures to learn(even my Grammar is likely basicLevel well am from PH good at reading but basic in writing and speaking English)
This fanfic is better than some popular novels! The story is exciting and there are no plot holes, the writing quality is 5/5 :D :D :D :D :D :D
Finally a bl????? and it's such a great story............ GOOD JOB AUTHOR I'm supporting you???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
An interesting story that could be a lot better with bit more work on the translation. Gender indicators are a mess and there is a lot of flavor content missing after translation.
I think there is something wron with the 5 Stars Reviews....TrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrash