The pebble unbeknownst to him, bounced off a tree, slipped through a window, bounced off the head of a couple banging, rolled off the arm of the lady bouncing around, and fell into a questionable pool of white and clear liquids, bounced off the ground from a tremor caused in the nearest training ground, flew through the air after being kicked by the guy's feet at another climax, and flew out the crack in the window once again to land in a cup of tea, as a young man entered the pavilion, sat down, and started drinking…
It is a short and simple answer; an answer Lu Yan cannot ever relate to. He looks at her face to see her expression, but there is none. She is as calm as ever, no sadness nor remorse in her face. To say a thing like that without a change in expression shows how cold she really is.
"Fire Release: Dragon Fire Techni-" Sasuke began, taking a deep breath, only to stop with a gasp as he found his hands frozen before they could complete the final hand-sign.
Ok i tried. I tried so hard to see what the rest of you see. The quality story... never explained anything...From the beginning you are pretty much just told the resaults, but have no way of visualizing anything due to no explination as to how things happen. I mean can anyone tell me what he is driving? What does it look like? Cus i have no idea...Also time seems to be rather ****ed up. A few days after everything went to hell and we are in mad max territory??? Now no one cares about eachother anymore. To the point that there is food shortages already? As for the translation... there are a lot of mistakes in the first 20+ chapters. Some i honestly don't know if they are the authors or the translators fault tho. I loved the premise. Zombie apocalypse and the MC is basically either a mechanic or something from a rts. That hasn't happened sadly. And the way things are going i'm gonna struggle to continue going.If this is your first read in a while you can have a good time here but if you are looking for quality then look ells where. My final verdict is that the author need to mature as a writer and this is a decent but not good first try(or so i hope). Sry if this piss u off cus u love it but it's kinda really bad...
Although the author’s wording is a little off—which I’m guessing because it’s their first novel and not native English speaking— the novel is very well written. The pacing is gripping and the way they tell the story actually had me invested as though I was dealing with it myself. It’s very emotional, there’s a perfect balance of thought process and descriptions. I absolutely adore just how much effort and imagination that put into this. I don’t think people should complain about the R that happens in the first chapter. The world is a dark place sometimes, and I feel it takes a lot of courage to explore this, for the MC to become the person they need to be to prevent other things from happening like this in the further.Great work! Keep it up.
great story author, it's one of the kind stories which i binge read to 190 chapters, those who love" my three wives are vampires" would love this story
NTR novels merit only one star.... disgusting ?
So ganda. I love the story po! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️??
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Ah man.. good story.. you have marvelous background story.. path of beast king.. make sure you make great story.. because if you are not make good story.. you will make the background suck.. overall this is great.. and this like game that I know.. with nickname that normal and not like poetry in Chinese vrmmo novel
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Writing quality is goodWell designed charactersGood background setting. Chapter update stability is goodOverall the book is good. Keep up the good work author