I really liked how he started in the story! Instead of just playing football, it’s also about character development as well as setting a foothold into his “new life”. There are some wrong-written words but everything is still easy to understand?? but because of the development it has a rather slow start but all in all I really recommend reading the story!
Good book with evil and villain main character. no moral restraints and willing to do anything for power and benefits. story is good and world is gradually being fleshed out.
One of the Typical Villain NovelIf you're new to this type of Villain Novel, you can try this out! At Chapter 30, There is progress in the relationship. The MC while kinda dumb, its still okay i guess.Hope he changec his view of the world though, its gonna get annoying if he keeps thinking of it as a novel world and not a real world :/Thx a lot for the translation :)
this is really an amateur/nonsense novel. i think author is just trying to pass time poorly. mc has a cultivation manual from his master but he don't know any cultivation levels or any other cultivator/body forger and ask others what does a ranked one mean. he knows that he encounters demons and didn't want to report of officials lest they think he is talkin nonsense when these officials are actually clearing these demons secretly and know more about demon than him and mc can still get some clues what officials were doing like what happn in town. also mc say he live in low martial world but except for him there is no other person in town seen in early novel who even uses knife or weapon for hunting/training he just sells forged daily use items and when other ask why no weapons he says no one use them in town. no introduction to cultivation levels and no idea whats going on in mc current living world in early chapters it's like in authors mind he think readers already know. and when mc gets blood bead he uses it without any vigilance clearly showing stupidity even when he saw others trying evil method on town people with these beads let's not talk about the woman who was next door when he world traveled for first time.
Haven't read but the synopsis is intriguing but is the summoner really a woman? Not really against it but based on the type of stories I've seen and the fact this is Chinese the woman might turn into the love interest real quick who the protagonist simps so much I hope my assumptions are incorrect though and that this would turn out quite good
After an...unintentionally long hiatus from wn, I decided to come back to some nice PancakesWitch novels. I was sad to see that some were already completed, but then I saw that there were new stories and I was overjoyed.I started reading this one and I immediately knew that it would be my kind of story. I can't wait to see what's in store! Keep up the great work!
If you're picking this book. Do know that there is a lot of show-not-tell moment. Keep in mind, if the protagonist is talking to something, someone, or himself, he will, and always put on a smile.This detail is rarely mentioned by him narrating it, but the cues throughout the story hinted it, and the people around him will sometimes mention it in their dialog.That took me a moment to notice on first few chapters. Hope this will elevate the experience of whoever as clueless as I do at first read. If not, it is a fun detail to mention imo.Basically, the mc is one smug little basta-
When are you going to update this story ? It has already been a year since the last update. Are you ever going to update this story? Or are you going to abandon it?
I remember reading this back in 2017-2018 back when I'm browsing for some good novel similar to Eliza-sama. During those days, I don't bother to create a webnovel account since I'm not keen on using it (but now I'll definitely use webnovel more since wattpad sucks nowadays). I have to say, I read this once again for the memories and yup, it's still as good as I remember. I was hoping for similar book like this where the female lead focus on their own survival while having a realistic outcomes because I'm a sucker like that.
Great Novel few gramatical errors but I really like it. Worldbuilding is not the best there ever was but its not bad either. MC is getting stronger in a weird way we dont know his full strenght most of the time. MC should get more personality like he is doing 3 things in this novel: Fighting, Traveling and having sex with Monalise even his intteractions with others are bland and he feels omnipotent like he knows what everybody is thinking about him. But even with few flaws I really like this novel especially Henry imo he is best thing that happened to whole story.
The writing quality is much better than most the books on webnovel. The thing that is lacking is that when I was reading the dialogues, it sounded monotonous to me. I felt like I couldn't see or understand the charcaters' expressions that time. Plot is much better and charcaters were nearly perfect. This is one epic harem romance novel if this is continued until the end of the book....
Wow just wow