Read a few chapters after the pay wall before I dropped it.
Good idea, bad execution that slowly gets worse.
The MC leans into his medieval mindset really fast. he turns into a a hole fast, but not even an enjoyable one.
The author gives a couple blanket statements on how the Mc knows the inventions early on, a lot of them make no sense for the Mc to know. It was the same thing with the resources to make the inventions, just a blanket statement that the barony is rich in steel.
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I thought it was going to be just another novel where the protagonist gains infinite skills from the beginning and the author just uses a different skill for each situation without ever delving into one itself, but until chapter 20 it's pretty cool, his skills so far they are very simple, but the world so far is being well built let's see the next 20 chapters that will be released (google translator)
I really enjoy this Novel. It's very interesting to read something different for a change. so keep up the good work writer and don't get influenced by others, keep this up and you will go places.
This is just shameful. Check the previous 10 check-in novels and to your absolute shock...you'll find they're the exact same but with a slighty (I stress slightly) different theme.
There's nothing wrong in being unoriginal, or reusing a successful concept - but come on, it's not a different story if you just change one word every sentence.
This is my second review after a month with over 100 chapters.
Writing a hundred chapters in a month is quite hard but thankfully, I pulled it off.
Now, I don't want to talk too much on why you should read this story. But, there are some things that I would like to highlight.
You will get antagonists but you won't get many devilish, evil villains. There will many challengers that keeps on improving at the same pace as the main character.
It is a novel with three core tropes; Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Sword Cultivation.
Dual Cultivation- You will find it constantly in the story and with different kinds of female. Remember, everything is just a fiction so I will be writing anything I want to no matter how absurd it might be.
Devil Cultivation- It takes off a slow start but it has a bigger plot in it. And if you read the book properly you will find why.
Sword Cultivation- It is the main focus of the story and the main plot where the story revolves.
And, there are some mysteries for many readers regarding some characters, some events, some places, so please calm down and if you don't understand anything, just wait for future chapters.
The writing quality is not too good but not too bad either.
Updates stability is something I will try to keep up with 3 chapters per day.
Story Development will be on focus when the world background expands. As for the character design, I believe you can understand more on them after reading like literally hundreds of chapters. Because, each one of them has a certain goal, certain motivation and certain personality.
Give the free chapters a try in free time and if you like it, continue, if you don't then you can drop it.
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System novels never stop to astound me. I have read upto 15 chapters now and the overall story of Goddess chasing system is great. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I just hope author adds more chapters and not discontinues the novel. I hope it's not like the stupid MC leaving every girl after making them fall in love.
looking forward to more chapters.
He is literally a Son of a *** Simp can't even reject a Girl that he not loves to not become his Wife..
All Simp Author go to h. .ell.
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