A must Read book! Everything is interesting to the plot, world background and characters, don't drop this and never lose the motivation to write, I'm cheering you on
Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.
Sounds like an original and novel concept. I'm looking forward to giving it a try.
The book immediately starts with action that draws you in. It’s fascinating and will be interesting to see where it goes from the first few chapters.
Not a great story don’t recommend.
A great storyline. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful, good use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. A great story indeed.
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not bad, but neither is it good. the book follows the reincarnation of the MC in a fantasy world. This book has the same premise as epic of caterpillar and goblin evolution. While the character is logical he is also only pseudo ethical. Basically his morals are pretty loose and his bottom line of what he will do is pretty low. Much like the books above the MC gains power by assimilation of his enemies. The MC also gains followers by saving them or forcing them to submit, he never actually wins anyone over the any other way. Based on what I've read so far, writing quality will probably start to suffer as more characters are added, as current cast already lacks depth. Writer does attempt to build side characters through doing pov chapters for them, but it all just seems like feeler material and doesn't really connect you with the character. Lastly there are alot of they that should I or him that should be I or her. Grammar errors kind of take away from the story. Over all this is a decent story that is replica of novels already on the site.
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Hopefully the author will not suffocate us with nationalistic propaganda and racism as is usually the case with novels in modern/futuristic setting.
This novel is pretty good, the grammar could improve but that's about it.
It's not like those trash novels where it's really hard to read them.
I hope this one gets pick and has quick updates
Even within the group of sign in novels, this one is lackluster. The system is not explained properly, the MC makes questionable choices, the other characters are a bunch of idiots (including his sister). I suggest you save your time for one of the better stories offered this week.