Pumpkin_King10
This novel has a good plot development and every chara is pretty interesting. It is easy to read and catch up to, so refreshing; nice to fill the free time.
But one thing that misses in this novel... why u didn't put a "comedy" tag, author? I laugh several times srsly hahaha
LIBE IS SO CUTE AND HER ACTION TO HIRO KILLS ME
The story is interesting I'd like to see more chapters update soon. And keep up the story line please. I always like rebirth stories, especially the business ones.
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It’s a story about a misogynist in a misandrist world. BUt there’s hardly any difference in this world and any other generic plain medieval world on this platform.
There are a lot of other minor things that bothered me enough to drop it without reading to full but I’ll mention the most glaring.
The mc is supposed to be super smart but the author can’t write him smart. So they made others stupid. He will mention the most obvious common sense stuff and then say others were blown away by his intelligence. He’s basically the one eyed king in the land of blind.
The world is misandrist but there’s hardly anything mentioned about it. (Except maybe male red light districts. If it even counts as one.)
And the repeated (and frankly stupid in this kind of story based novel) trope about mc ”conquering” women to the point of belief reversal with his tool.
Anyway I’ve avoided spoilers (I think). This was not for me. Though author’s grammar is fine(which is a prize here), the writing itself can be improved.
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Another the so called go stromg quietly hahaBut every chapter he will intervene in conflict that he can avoid in the first place Guys you know the reason why would he intervene in that conflict well just like the other dog brain chinese authors the mc here is thirsty about girls its like he havent seen any girl in his lifeChinese authors really doesnt learn
A good work, but it still has few chapters, so I won't make a deeper analysis, but the descriptions are deep, the dialogs are nice, the script is very instigating and the protagonist who has a huge future...
The first 100 or so chapters at very nice. But after that the author goes from slow slice of love to slowmotion.The author fills chapters with unnecessary long explanations for manga, anime, music context. I mean one paragraph is enough for this story but no it’s entire chapters wasted for things I could search online if interested.It’s really sad. Furthermore during the song creation big parts of the songs are just copied in the chapters… just useless space.Also the characters are really nice and deep but most of the conversations are just too friendly and also repetitive. I mean how often do you say thank you to your friends it’s just abnormal.To summarise after 100 chapters the novel is increasingly tiring. And reeks like the author just wants to make more money for usless chapters. I drop this now at chapter 267, hopefully the author goes back to before.
Tell me how high you had to be to think you was in another world? 5 years and now just coming down. /
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The story is captivating once again just like "your love is killing me"... Your stories are becoming interesting. This new book is hot. I would love to read more of the two golden couples and what will happen at the end of the day. More chapters please. Keep up the good work
Nice cultivation system, totally unrealistic character behaviour. Mc's previous body occupant gest killed by his sister and MC flirts with her instead of pissing his pants from fear? If she slapped him again novel would be 3 chapters long. The constant switching between "I'll kill them all to level up" and "OMG I have to kill" In mc's attitude also makes no sense...
