Sunshine001
Another amazing book in the works!! Hopefully we get a little more supernatural powers this time around compared to the other books. For anyone that reads this review, definitely stick around for this story.
This book is genuinely such a fun read, though a few issues stick out, most notably the grammar and repetitive words. The story is very interesting and seems to be well thought out, though oddly enough, many side characters lack any form of description. The worldbuilding at times can also be all over the place, sometimes dumping a lot of information at once, though is still somewhat well done and very intriguing. Definitely worth the time it takes to read, and besides those issues is quite a good and entertaining book.
prery fun story to read. the first one I've read with the mc being a hydra. the characters are interesting and fun.
I do not know what I expected but I did not expect an MC with indecisive mental retardation, before chapter 50 he already has an arem of 5 women, but it is useless and does not go for any or let someone else do it to them. Until chapter 70 I do not see why the novel has that title, if the MC goes for the girls of the company, and by God what he has with his friend seems so useless, they had to develop the MC more and gradually introduce the arem little developed his stories, everything is very forced and the MC remains like an idescid idiot, useless, that if it were not for the author makes the shits go well and the women around him are retarded I do not imagine how he can get out of problems.
Grammar is on point. The characters are well depicted. It also has a very unique interesting plot although it's not yet quite visible in the free chapters. Thanks author!
One of the stories I check out every day for updates.
There are two things which put me off a little bit. Firstly the extremely long first life (billions of years) and secondly the expectations the title and synopsis create. Because the first life is so long it creates so many unanswered questions which just simply annoys the hell out of me.
Secondly the title and synopsis create certain kind of expectations what the story is going to be like and it certainly delivered for the most part. In the later chapters though things take a different turn. This will most likely annoy readers who are expecting things to follow the style of "Emperor's domination".
Meh. Too boring, naive and insipid to continue reading. The hero and his life are poorly revealed, sometimes not realistic. From the beginning of the beta-test a line of cheats begins and- No, this is too stereotyped to continue reading.
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don't get your hopes up the first chapter is clickbait. waste of time. clowns
im rly sad you stopped this one.
shame on the fkers who ****talked your amazing story.
if you ever go on, ill be you nr1 fan ^^
oke 1st review ever, this 140 char thing sucks xD
ill keep track of you if i can!
This novel is blood boiling. I want to make this as short and ****** as possible for I feel I could write a plethora of pages about this novel. It’s the closest Web Novel to reach the boundaries of an actual published book in that it uses many in-depth methods you would see in a great work of fiction. It has POV transitions. Where many web novels fail to give a perspective other than the protagonists, this novel does not fail and gives the reader the enjoyment of an interesting story with multiple facets to it. The world building in this novel ranks among the best I’ve ever seen of a web novel. It’s rich, inclusive to the plot, and so well written. I’m a personal fan of fictional histories and world building, and this novel hits all the spots. Perhaps most importantly is the cast of characters. The MC is a transmigration yet only has the benefit of some memories of his former graduate self. He is not powerful to the point that he impervious to threats and rather the opposite. I look forward to his growth, further use of his keen mind and eloquent verbal manipulation in dealing with the machinations that are pushing the kingdom to the precipice. And to accompany this protagonist and a great array of characters, fleshed out and interesting, helping and scheming against the protagonist. The villains in this are no slackers and defy the standard web novel villain that’s dumber than a stack of bricks. Of course, the great translation quality of this novel makes the novel just as much as the other factors. I’ve seen almost no errors in the translation and the structuring of the extensive word count that makes up a single chapter in this work is pleasing to say the least. It makes the story all the more wonderful to read. I’ll leave the story up to other reviews to spoil, but I say read it yourself. It isn’t fast, it’s paced more like a an actual novel rather than a web novel, but it will give a more enjoyable story overall. The 14 chapters a week release rate is enough to satisfy all but the most avid reader. I for one cannot get enough, but will endeavor to be patient.
How Do I Begin? I have no idea.
Anyway, this will be a harem novel with powers. The apocalypse stuff happened long ago but it has a lot of influence on the plot a little later on. I'll update this daily but as I'm more focused on my main novel Dawn- an age of darkness, things might be slower. And this is my first time writing in this genre so if anything strikes you funny, do let me know.
Do give me all your power stones and hopefully I'll win.
