well somebody tell me it's just me or story is really going fast and also mc is the op type. don't know what to say or to not well whatever hope story gonna be interesting in upcoming chapters
So far so good I'm waiting on more chapters though I'll surely keep an eye on it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
a fantastic novel. has a light bit of comedy as well.
Well thought out.
MC is an extremely well written character.
This is much better than most of the other works I h e perused on here. background world building writing quality, all excellent.
granted the character won't develop much, its in his nature, which is expected and is completely in line with the story.
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND giving this a good read.
let's start with a writing quality. As my English isn't top tier, I won't even speak about grammar mistakes as I myself didn't noticed them. to me it was easy to read. I like that characters shows real personalities and even side characters don't act as a random npcs. For me its deffinetly a good thing. as novel has only 5 chapters now, I won't comment on updating stability. And for the world view, it is really well written. To be honest, this novel has a potential to be a top tier novel(as long as author does not mess up along the way!)
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Very interestkng premise, and good execution. The main character is interesting and charasmatic, and he makes this a very fun read.
Overall, the story is reall good.
Keep up the good work.
A very heart warming realistic fiction. The suspense part was very curious... especially when her father calls her .
I mostly liked the character names which are so realistic...preetham and shristi.
Wow! This is probably one of the best first two chapters I've read in a long time. Does the author have any other work? Either way, I'm a huge fan. Awesome original story and interesting MC. I can't wait to find out where this is heading.
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A good read, i enjoyed all of the chapters and always looked forward to more. The only thing i can complain about is the lack of chapters xD, give me more!!!