God_069
I will advise all the views to read this novel. The story amazing as well as interesting. I Want MORE too. Can not wait. [img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]
Excellent story, excellent write up, extraordinary flow. I wish to see this played on tv.
Some very very good work done here and i think the author deserve some applause.
Sounds good but executed horribly, this is supposed be a be game but why can people do superhuman events in it aside from the character taking over and someone speedrunning in a realistic game please, be more fake, and in reality it was in the span of like 3 days he released 3-4 groundbreaking games that are like a second world but no one thinks anything is wrong / found out about him… I’ just so disappointed to say the least other novels do it so much better even if they’re awe ful
the wife and stranger going to hotel is just a act to make mc leave the wife family they not really fkin just an actor but the rest of the chapter is just meaningless powerup and taming beast so I just skim through it
i took the plunge for everyone who is curious about this novel as of now(chap 86) i would like to say the story is aight its as most people have said like the shield girl one but a little less cringe but with more chinese influence although it has an american background at some point in the 30's-40's it wasnt even a novel anymore it feels like a machine translation where one sentence its completely wrong and the next its the right grammar as the story is progressing the mc is slowly going from reg player who got supremely lucky to cliche arrogant chinese mc who looks down on everyone i also really hoped that there wouldnt be any "im rich so everyone caters to me and i can throw money around like it's nothing so everyone is my servant" kind of side villians but you do see it every few chapters at the beginning the author or translater (by how the novel is reading) was doing pretty well and keeping up with stats and skills but later has just totally given up on correcting mistakes and just copy pasteing mtls i would like to say that ill continue holding out and hoping that maybe it would get better but as of now id say theres no hope, u gotta pay for chapters 20 chapters early and theres no effort being put into the grammar so that people who have a hard time reading will have an even harder time id say just give up dont read it if ur curious go ahead its not like im your boss
Writing the review for support. The story needs some work but it has some promise, looking forward to future developments, author! .......
How you explain everything in details is really helpful and I love it, its very understandable ???. You synopsis is short and it didn't reveal much which is brilliant.
I normally don't write reviews, but I had to for this novel. I haven't enjoyed a novel this much in a while. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens next.
this novel is just the next words: boring as hell!!
Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol
After reading the first 15 chapters it is becoming more and more painful to read this sloppy machine translated novel with minimal editing I hope that the quality will improve in the future but I see that as unlikely.
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