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I have no words to describe this book. It's simply the best. By far I have read 9 chapters and it had me hooked. I love the interaction between Mc and his family.I hope to read more and to those who loves to read levelling up book it is highly recommended. Do give it a try???
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"Coupled with his million years of experience" - this sentence usually makes me drop a lot of novels if I find mc doing stupid things/making choices that don't make sense...
One of the best novels i have read on This siste.Almost perfect quality in all aspects, With a story the hooks you from the get go.A gem to be found on this site, keep up the good work author!
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The story starts off pretty well, doing a good job of introducing the plot and some characters (that at least feel real and have some depth) as well as relevant information about the world. I noticed a few errors in writing, be it tense or singular / plural mistakes, this could be an issue with translation(?)
Read the raw to around chapter 50~ and it’s already very boring.Spoilers headSo that fallen angel chick he has enslaved is actually the daughter of Lucifer.His childhood friend turned out to be some super powerful war angel on more powerful then the seraphim.There was this goddess chick that destroyed a world willing became MC’s slave.His foster mother turned out to be some ancient super weapon designed to kill super god, a god that’s more powerful than the god of light and dark.There also this half dead angel whose sole fragments he absorbed became his master, which I strongly suspects would also join his harem at some point.At the point where I dropped the book MC is aready killing demon emperors.At Chapter 50~! And only a few years since he was born! So many coincidence in such a short amount of time crammed to tightly at a single point is this novels flaw.
This novel has good writing, use of characters, and premise.?????????????????????????????????????????
Personally for me it is a near perfect novel. Reasons are 1. The smoothness of story progression2. Characters - very realistic and well thought3. Action scenes are nicely done4. There is a strong sense of purpose in whatever actions the protagonist and side characters performSPOILER BELOWFor the author - I understand why the three energies can’t mix and fuse but desmond being so overwhelmingly talented can’t he use mana as the primary energy, ki or aura for body strengthing and lastly arcanum for the mind/soul. Please think about it dear author, once again absolutely love your work?
The story and character was all fine reading early on, but...The way the mc has to bend to the will of system is one thing, but to force it in to a romance, or harem what ever it decides to, that's just throws the whole story development out the window!Keep the system neutral or power hungry but not romance oriented that's just mehhh
I used to be a fan of Indian mythology and I like where the story is going so far .Hope this one will break the records of your other one on Webnovel.
This is a new novel and people will not remove their reviews of the last novel. Love the book and thought I should let you enjoy it too. Just leave a comment or a review of how much you like or dislike the book and I will most likly answer.
