Great story, sometimes it makes you want more, angry or confuse, but slow update, i hope it can update more frequently so we can enjoy this one
Should change the name of this book to: "I locked the chapters early so people won't read it, so nyah nyah nyah!"
This is an incredible book can't wait for their love story to develop more!
It's still early, but this latest book from sun seems to be coming along nicely. Kite has some personality while also being a typical isekai protagonist. It's hard to describe what I mean.
Nope. I can't do it. I'm here for the romance. I'm not gonna continue reading about a self loathing character that doesn't believe he should be loved go to another world just to fall in love them go back to the main world just for him to go into that self loathing personality. Then probably have to read a couple hundred more chapters just for a hint on whether they'll end up together. Like tell us that this is a drama story that just so happens to have action, magic and whatnot. Like at this point I'd rather the heroine die so at least I know they won't get together instead of you constantly teasing the situation.
The main character claims he plays games all day yet he doesn't know basic knowledge about games? The first skill he gets is called beast tame and when he chooses a class he finds the class 'beast king' that would probably compliment his first and only skill and he didn't choose it but kept looking at the rest? And he decided to choose the class the halves his strength? Dude that's the dumbest **** ever, that's like purposefully making yourself a cripple. The writing quality is abismal as there are many spelling mistakes and he uses '...' instead of "..." For when people are talking you use '...' for when people are thinking "..." Is when you speak you sod. The system is kinda retarded and too long, the skills are half assed as they could only used on one thing such as the beast tame and it doesn't even last long. The character names himself 'Shadow lord' I'm not kidding, that's an insane amount of cringe tbh it's like when I was 5 and I created my animal jam account and decided yeah this is a cool name it's edgy duddee.
great start ,,,,,,i need to read more before
To those who will read, are reading, or have read my work, thank you very much. I am deeply honored and incredibly grateful for the opportunity to share my obsessions, curiosities, and imagination with you. It means the world to me that you choose to inhabit the world I create, even if only briefly. I promise to write to the best of my abilities and to update this novel with at least one chapter a day. I hope you’ll give me and my story a chance to enchant you.
Going in, let's hope it is any good.......
Quite an interesting concept, definitely new to all the systems, cultivations, and other type of novels in this platform.Let's see how this will work out.
I love this novel!! You got me hooked already in the first chap and forced me to binge the rest! If this keeps up I might start spending on patreon for the first time ever!
I kind get why this story has so little views even with the number of chapters.Listen man i get that you’re a newbie writer and i commend you for your work both for the writing style and the amount of chapters.,heck even the genre of world traveling is dope. But!I just started the novel and so i need to be hooked so what do you do? You introduce an extremely hateful and annoying character at the start.Then? You make the mc’s first enemy into his love interest... now i get that the second one is not necessarily bad heck even good if done right.But you just messed up her character and made it seem as if she is an ice queen then and extremely warm person then a sadist that likes to slap anyone who mentions her sister to her which is extremely ****ed to be honest as a normal human much less a man wouldn’t fucking stand by if someone slapped him for no reason but you made the mc not only not rebuke her but also just apologize to her and hug her to make her feel all better..... that made quite angry. Huff i don’t want to be too harsh to a budding writer since I understand that you’re doing you best and for that i commend you but i just shared with you what i felt from the first 40 chapters and so this would be extremely good feedback to you.I lost all desire to continue after he hugged her when she slapped him like who the **** does that? Anyway hope you all the best.