so far thw trial read was good. the story progess slow. but it was enjoyable to ready.for the MC age is turn into 10 years was a advantage for him since no one with find it odd if he was clueless and navie at times.
If you are going to only Skim this Review, then I'll tell you it is a ok story quality-wise, but it is a very fun story. Even though this is a story based around a mmorpg, the author did not think too deeply how mmorpgs work as a game and just used game elements to create story *******. Like how losing a level upon character death is used to create stakes and consequences for the players about to do a risky plays which is compounded as higher levels become very grind heavy. You can see how this would make fights more tense when the odds are against the heroes and death in a game substantial but not fatal. However, when viewed as a game, this mechanic is incredible harsh and not player friendly with how easy it is to die in this game. When you die, you lose the level, the stats that came with it, any skills that unlock on those levels and all proficiency with said skills, and maybe an equipment piece you had now free for anyone to take. These are very powerful reason to not die for a story character, but as a random player, this death penalty will kill alot of player interest. Now if you can ignore all of the game stuff as a possible game and just take those at face value, then you can focus on the best parts. The characters. Alot of main characters are quirky and memorable which leads to alot of fun interactions and situations. I could talk about them in more depth like with the game problems but that will ruin the fun.TL;DR: Story about a bad mmorpg with funny and enjoyable main characters.
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Read all the chapters in 3 days, have been enjoying it a lot.Cool story, characters and world building, including kingdom building...There are still some grammar errors and some caused by distraction but they have been diminishing so I don't really see a problem.Only thing that i find a little annoying isn't the grammar errors but the punctuation ones, those are really important, if you could pay a little more attention to them, since they are really essential for the telling of a story and the reader's impression of it... would be a great boost to this novel.In conclusion, great work, pls don't look at my criticism as somethhing bad because that wasn't my intention and keep on doing what you do.You have something really good here, keep up :3Cheers ;)
So let's start this off nice and easy. Please ignore alot of the low star reviews of this novel. If you look at thier chapter status it speaks volumes by itself. Some haven't even read it and others are in the low 100's - 200'sWhat this novel is. For our MC we have THE BLOOD CALAMITY MU CHEN.While the novel does start of slow and people have complained about lack of mass murder in early chapters (think about it it's his hometown and he's a kid) Next we have school (fiercer for sure but still mild compared to his true identity) After that though **** better watch out the BLOOD CALAMITY MU CHEN is unleashed. This MC is not quite li qiyue fierce (Emporers Domination) , but is definitely Chu Feng fierce(Martial God Asura).Again please don't take the negative reviews seriously with 0-100 chapters read. That's like saying game of thrones is a terrible show having only watched 4 episodes but not knowing what your missing.
I find it a good read. Different from other novels here. Wonderful story and well developed characters. Not your wishy washy romantic or too op mc here. Overall i find myself looking forward every evenings for an update. I hope it could release 3 times a day.
Sadly I never enjoy flawed systems and insanely stupid MC's. Eve knowing her family's power and tactics would never advocate her name like that so overall this is a great dissapointment in story direction.
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Incredible story. I cant wait to finish the book and read more updated chapters. It gives you clear picture of what's happening and you feel being part of the story. I love it
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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