It's hard to find an FL sign-in novel and even harder to find a well-written one. The world-building is well-planned, and the FL has an actual personality and intelligence. There is face-slapping, but it's done well and not drawn-out stupidity.Overall, I’m loving it so far.
please start updating again. we'll worth it.
Descriptions are amazing! Even though I'm not a military fan, there's a very clear image within my mind.However, do note that most webnovel readers enjoy short and snappy paragraphs to quickly read though.Looking forward to more from this author!
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need to hire an editor, the longer I read the more glaring the Grammer issues...............................................................
Very engaging story and the plot twist caught me by surprise! Kila is very well written and I want to see more of his adventures soon. Hoping for a part 2
Wow, I like how it started in the middle of an out of this world battle. It had set the tone for the story. I also love the writing style. It clearly depicts the scene, capturing you right then and there. :D I highly recommend this novel. READ IT :) It's worth your time :D Great job author-nim :))
to preface this review, I read until the end of the free chapters and I figured I should give my piece.The premise from the title does sound incredible, even for a system novel and when the MC finally gets more involved in the story around chapter 16-20, it starts to pick up. Between chapter 5-15 ish involves a lot of world building but it's not related to the MC which was a turn off for me.The system also takes a long time to come into the picture (around chapter 22 ish). Generally speaking, the starting chapters can stand to be rearranged or be condensed since it's not enough of a hook imo. As from the brief time I had with the free chapters, the MC is written somewhat close to an 8 year old would think, albeit more mature than expected which is a nice detail. I honestly couldn't tell you who are the side characters beyond showing me the names and what they are but not much more.It definitely has promise and definitely isn't a bad read if you are looking for a pirate themed novel. It just could be executed better from an entertainment standpoint.
To the readers who love lots of action plots, thriller , drama, white haired MC's and gore content with levels of plot twists. This book is absolutely recommended for you. Coming to review, author did a great job in describing the place where the boy stayed and his nurturing environment. In a small span of time many things happened. From getting heart-broken for our poor and lovely MC's shortcomings to enjoying the thrilling journey with him. The world background is top tier. You can feel and visualise the world and it's dynamics. The power struggle is real and not an easy match. The unknown path unfolds. I'm not gonna spoil more :) I loved the plot. The MC's character is well written as well as all the characters in the initial chapters. Can't wait how the story unfolds more. To the author, I would like to suggest if a new character is introduced and is going to have a role to play in the main trope then some elaboration of features would help the readers retain them in their mind more. It's all about how we feel when we are introduced to him/her for the first time. Other than that the story is ?. It has many elements to it. I have already added it to my library :)
So far it make me satisfied on this story. Not confusing the reader but it make me more curious for each chapter. Good job author making this story interesting for me. Keep going.
Amazing book, I was originally skeptical about reading it because it had no reviews, but my goodness I’ve found a hidden gem. It is totally WORTH A READ! the writing and grammar is perfect and the story is really interesting, furthermore the characters have great depth and relatability. Thank you author and I hope this book gets all the support it deserves because it deserves a lot. Btw I would suggest re-writing the synopsis because it doesn’t do your book justice! =) ty for the novel